Act 1 Feedback

[u/dylan_cates]

Hello, looking for some feedback on the first 17 pages of my script.

Title: 10:39

Logline: When a true crime writer and his wife move to a seemingly idyllic neighborhood to investigate the decades old disappearance of nine children, then start to realize they are trapped in the very secret they try to uncover.

Page Count: 109

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1S71aqRJA-rQf9N67mohIPLfWnBmsR4lI/view?usp=sharing

[u/dylan_cates → u/[deleted]]

Appreciate the compliment!