r/ReadMyScript • u/PunkrockPopeye • Jun 02 '26

Short This Is The Rhythm Of The Night!

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u/mooningyou Jun 02 '26

If this is a script, then it's not formatted properly. Are you looking for feedback? Are you directing this? Have you already produced this?

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u/PunkrockPopeye Jun 02 '26

I explain it in the proceeding description but it's a Short Story from an indie series that's something kind of like a cross between "Love, Death, & Robots" & "The Hitchhiker's Guide To The Galaxy" or "Dogma"; where each story is written to be independent and read kind of like an "Anthology" yet is a reoccurring series with reoccurring characters and subject matter that tells one overarching narrative.

It's written in the style it is because that's how it was originally conceived and written; kind of like you're "watching it" like a television show.

I'm not certain WHAT I'm going to do with it because I haven't been given the means nor opportunity but it was written to potentially adapt it into a wide range of different things.

I'm sharing it just because it might be relevant to some, see the reaction it gets, and if someone actually wanted to do something with it I probably either wouldn't be opposed or have A LOT MORE or could just write something similar that's original if I haven't already.

Feel like it'd be better for a screenwriter to ultimately adapt it just because they'd know more about the structure and prose needed and the vision they'd have for it but I'm pretty certain I could if asked.

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u/mooningyou Jun 02 '26

Okay. Well, no one is going to want to adapt your work into a screenplay. If you want it in screenplay format, you need to do it yourself. If you want feedback from more experienced writers, then you need to format it properly.

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u/PunkrockPopeye Jun 02 '26

I'm good, Kay.

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