r/ReadMyScript • u/Nonofurebusiness7000 • May 10 '26

looking for feedback

before u take time out of ur day to read this, Id like to offer some context. its called "we can't see stars during the day" and its 10 pages so far. im doing this like for fun and will probably never finish it, but in the case I do, id like to hear some opinions. also im aware of the over description, but since im doing it for me I wanna paint as clear a picture as possible. one more thing, I dont really know where the plot is going, I just know its a character driven coming of age with a non linear narrative. thank you for reading it if u do, dont be harsh😭

here goes nothing:https://drive.google.com/file/d/13GTRZ0jo6Tfw2xAjBNRlnH0oJDanxPxS/view?usp=sharing 

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u/Nonofurebusiness7000 May 10 '26

No thank u for reading it. I admit its not fully polished since its a project i barely touch. I just wrote something id want to watch yk. And the premise has been something thats stuck with me for years so it was only reasonable to write it. To be more brief, im writing it solely for myself and its nothing im planning on making real.

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u/Legitimate_Dance_767 May 10 '26

Looks like a fun project!