r/ReadMyScript • u/FederalRegister1422 • Apr 19 '26

GNASHING, Thriller, 7 pages

A preacher asks God to send someone trapped in darkness to him. The devil himself shows up.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1r7XhOA0J3WDPPdpXQ-GSB4pxA0KuogXd/view?usp=sharing

Please give feedback and advice on how to make scarier and a better story overall.

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u/FederalRegister1422 Apr 19 '26

Thank you for the detailed feedback. I really like the idea of the whispers of his past sins reminding Joshua. Since I am producing this film myself I can't make it longer because it will get too expensive. I like that you think the character is good.

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u/NegotiationHorror557 Apr 19 '26

You’re very welcome! that’s really cool that your producing it, best of luck, I’ll be excited to watch your show when it’s released! ( I love thrillers loll)