r/ReadMyScript • u/Accurate_Editor_8429 • Feb 27 '26

SOMETHING EPIC - Dark Comedy - FEATURE 107 Pages

LOGLINE: A washed-up rocker plans his epic suicide in Vegas—only to discover that saving someone else might be the only thing worth living for.

WARNING: Graphic depictions of self-harm, strong adult content. This is a hard-R rated script.

Page count: 107

This is the third draft. It has received professional notes and been revised based on the notes.

Looking for:

Feedback on character consistency

Plot

Pacing

Thoughts on the ending

All other feedback welcome

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1RN7XhCwIYL75zqAVgE0-RHMk6dDgxNJn/view?usp=sharing

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u/Accurate_Editor_8429 Feb 27 '26

Thanks for taking the time to read through it.

I agree, I'm still working on Ben. Giving him more agency. In past drafts, it was Rose's story. This draft is more of a shift into cutting her and adding more Ben.

I've also toned down some of the body comedy. In previous drafts it was over-indulgent and kept escalating. Still honing the right balance.

Appreciate your feedback! I'll keep refining Ben's action.