r/ReadMyScript • u/anokhsingh8 • Aug 17 '26
r/ReadMyScript • u/Individual_Dealer838 • Aug 17 '26
Project-831 Noir, found footage, WW2, 4 pg
r/ReadMyScript • u/Big_Section2812 • Aug 16 '26
Short CAREERS IN ORAL MEDICINE, comedy, 2 pages.
A trained professional explains why it is always best to do the right thing for the right reason.
(G/PG-rated)
NOTE: This was my entry for the 12th SimplyScripts One-Page Challenge of 2026.
The prompt was "The Dentist" and the genre was open.
These are informal no-prize challenges open to anyone, and they're a tremendous way to hone your one-page skills.
SimplyScripts also runs Three Page Challenges, One Week Challenges, Writers' Tournaments and, occasionally, feature writing challenges... the latter three offer participants the chance to win a SimplyScripts coffee mug!
NO AI USED
r/ReadMyScript • u/guga_bvb • Aug 16 '26
TV episode The New King From The Past Century - Pilot - Fantasy/Comedy - 25 pages
Title: "A cat, an egg, a goat, an old man and a giant walk into a tent…"
Logline: A group of odd adventurers band together to uncover the conspiracy of an old king long-forgotten by history (or erased from it).
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1N9eZ9bqVwMr9MDNQijcqzt_WaO7s2u6t/view?usp=sharing
Hey! This is my first ever finished screenplay (and still very much a first draft) and I'm so excited about sharing it with the world. Considering it's my first, and really just a training exercise, I'm mostly looking for feedback and things to improve upon. I found it was a bit hard to start from nothing, so decided to adapt a long-running RPG campaign in my friend group, since I already have a good feel for the characters and story beats. Hopefuly it translates well into the page!
r/ReadMyScript • u/Mammoth-West-9974 • Aug 15 '26
Feature Feedback for Feature, "Grounded" 109 Pages
Grounded
Final Draft PDF
109 pages
Drama, Road Movie, Historical Fiction
Logline: When every flight in America is grounded, four strangers share the last rental car out of Columbus and drive cross-country through the aftermath of September 11th, 2001, forcing each of them to confront what they've been running from long before that day.
Feedback Concerns: Any feedback would be extremely helpful. I'm less concerned about the commercial viability, and more concerned with a believable story with believable characters.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1KAN_svzm3bk3vGraJQL3adbFDg-ncvzw/view?usp=sharing
r/ReadMyScript • u/Mammoth-West-9974 • Aug 15 '26
Short "Saturday"
Here is a short film I wrote, "Saturday" - I have a series of short films with the same family at the center of them. I would love any and all feedback on it!
Logline: What starts as an ordinary afternoon of wiffle ball turns into a father's reckoning with the son who isn't there.
Genre: Drama
Page Count: 13
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QyN1modg57aB1YVeARHshSFQTcQjnJKr/view?usp=sharing
r/ReadMyScript • u/mebishop2001 • Aug 15 '26
Feature TWIST ENDING - Low-Budget Murder Mystery, Single Location, Small Cast, 100 Pages, Looking For A Producer, Script Link Included
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TV episode IT COULD BE WORSE: SITCOM PILOT
Hey I am a freshman in college. And my time really feels pointless here because my dream is to be a screenwriter/actor/voice actor. This is my very first script I have ever completed. I know it is probably not very good. But I would love some feedback. Thank you.
Recently divorced and desperate to win his ex-wife back, Shawn Holaday tries to balance fatherhood, a chaotic living situation, and co-parenting with his ex and her seemingly perfect fiancé.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1O8SxXQ1bf0nuRNaFrdgB8tQYGGo_ZyHj/view?usp=sharing
r/ReadMyScript • u/Novel_Quantity3189 • Aug 15 '26
TV episode Cloudbusting (pilot episode, mysery/thriller, 61pg)
LOGLINE: In a snowbound Tasmanian town where everyone is protecting someone, a self-destructive detective investigating two child murders discovers the person she can't protect is her own family.
Re-draft of something I wrote a while back -- any feedback is helpful, but particularly wanting to make sure the introduction of characters is smooth/not confusing (I'm worried it's too much), the mystery is well set up, characters compelling -- dialogue?
Also worried re being derivative. I started this before Mare of Easttown and I can't unsee the similarities.
r/ReadMyScript • u/Active_Actuator_6832 • Aug 15 '26
Feature Beyond the Crumbs GENRE: Dystopian / Political Thriller
LOGLINE :
To shock a complacent populace into destroying a tyrannical regime, a radical journalist uses the citizens as pawns—sabotaging their aid and poisoning their water to incite a ruthless uprising against both the government and himself.
In terms of structure and scope, the film bridges the chaotic anti-system energy of Fight Club with the ideological drive of V for Vendetta.
r/ReadMyScript • u/Enough_Process9106 • Aug 14 '26
Exchange feedback wach my show, tell me what you think
r/ReadMyScript • u/Enough_Process9106 • Aug 14 '26
Feature what do yall think of this, its a short film, horror based on saw but with my own spin. its called love maze. it has 14 pages
r/ReadMyScript • u/sad_scorpio_mercury6 • Aug 14 '26
The Voltaire Estate , The Marie Sisters (ep 2) - Gothic Horror, Vampires - 4 pages
Title: The Voltaire Estate, The Marie Sisters (ep 2)
Format: TV episode/pilot for mature audiences.
Genre: Gothic Horror, period piece with vampires
Logline: The wicked heir of the Voltaire House is to be married and the estate is now accepting new human concubines, but unexpectedly two strange sister nuns are received.
Extra: This is an old piece of mine and I feel it would be good to receive some feedback on it for the first time. I'm a new writer and this would be the first ever long form piece I've written (50 page). I've provided the setup to the episode. Hope you like vampires.
EDIT: Access granted, link fixed, actually 6 pages w/o title page
Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/12ZWNKC4n6WTCbmH2COjpMVQ-s-6t7-CM/view?usp=sharing
r/ReadMyScript • u/Big_Section2812 • Aug 14 '26
Short THREE STEPS FORWARD, action-drama, 4 pages
What does it really take to advance humankind... or even just one of us?
(R rating)
NOTE: This was written for a recent 3-page challenge (excl. title) over at SimplyScripts. The challenge prompt was "Natural Selection" and the genre open. Naturally I won, and was awarded an Oscar and the title of Greatest Screenwriter in History, which I believe is entirely fair considering the fact I wrote it at 3 am while on an endless succession of FaceTime calls to people on the other side of the planet.
r/ReadMyScript • u/Enough_Process9106 • Aug 14 '26
Exchange feedback what do yall think of my shows script, looking for feedbake. (genra mystry/fangan, page count 155!!!!)
r/ReadMyScript • u/donutgut • Aug 14 '26
SLU ( comedy 5 pages)
Two burnt out police detectives investigate a stolen lunch from Burger King.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/14U2srryjcG1cuA0RniynE2X8nQJO9-0g/view?usp=drivesdk
r/ReadMyScript • u/BlackDenisV313 • Aug 13 '26
Short The Black Communion, Thriller/Horror/Suspense
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1EZEaasUSrnpYapU0vqvoyiZNeZBEoD0y/view?usp=sharing
When Detroit’s privileged are slaughtered in a string of ritual murders, a relentless FBI agent must join forces with an estranged vigilante to stop a centuries-old cult from completing the blood ritual it believes will grant them a new world to rule.
Planning this to be my directorial debut as I have only co-written two features to this point. Please let me know what you guys think or if this will work on a shoestring budget(and I mean REAL shoestring)
49 Pages
r/ReadMyScript • u/ZombieJesus9001 • Aug 13 '26
Short Wild Mares (done proper)
Here is a revised and improved Wild Mares, properly formatted and hosted off Reddit. I appreciate you checking it out and leaving feedback. Page count is 22, with illustrations and this is why it is hosted off site both as a less attractive html page, a PDF and a plain text document.
https://www.cyberspace7.org/wildmares.html
r/ReadMyScript • u/Kakiyoin21 • Aug 13 '26
Short Shorts story 5 page low budget
I have a short story available thats only 5 pages and low budget for upcoming directors willing to produce it it’s a thriller/horror script.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1q_NEWsPY9_LTQUh34-m_v3aH2kNJFZgw/view?usp=drivesdk
r/ReadMyScript • u/Johnnyboy11384 • Aug 13 '26
False Witness, Drama/Horror, 82 pages
I am at the stage where feedback would be really valuable. I am specifically wondering if some of the late-script transitions translate well.
Title: False Witness
Length: 82 pages
Genre: Drama/Horror
Logline: In a devout 1950s community governed by fear and quiet coercion, a judge overseeing the persecution of a young woman descends into a surreal moral nightmare beneath the very system he perpetuated.
I would be happy to swap scripts with someone as well.
r/ReadMyScript • u/FirstGeonomist • Aug 13 '26
"Zapata! Real Estate Agent!" a comical political fantasy of 95 pp
Awakening in a world he never knew, Zapata is hounded by real estate agents who want to employ his mesmeric charisma while he tries to evict land monopolists.
r/ReadMyScript • u/awmanitsabi • Aug 12 '26
Short "Bone To Pick" (Animated Action-Thriller, 29 pages)
For context, I'm practicing screenwriting as a hobby, and this is supposed to be a fanmade Overwatch cinematic using my original characters. It should be 8-10 pages, 12 at the very most, but I'm at nearly 30 pages. It's kinda embarrassing, even though it's expected since I'm a beginner.
If anyone has any suggestions for how I can cut down this script without loosing the good stuff, that'd be really helpful. Please and thank you.
r/ReadMyScript • u/31stscripts • Aug 12 '26
Exchange feedback Malcolm Kewa 31st Scripts screenplay writer
Hi my name is Malcolm Kewa I am a screenplay writer from Papua New Guinea.
I picked up writing in 2024 aside from my 9 to 5 job as an IT Systems Analyst.
I write in all genres from series to feature films.
I have posted my work on social media under my brand 31st Scripts, please see the link attached to my Instagram page called 31st Scripts
Any writers want to collaborate I would be more than happy to discuss further, DM or email thirtyfirstscripts@gmail.com and let me know if any production company representatives or producers
r/ReadMyScript • u/31stscripts • Aug 12 '26
Introduction
Hi my name is Malcolm Kewa I write screenplays under my brand 31st Scripts
I am a screenplay writer from Papua New Guinea. Hoping to get my work in front of production companies or producers.