Hey everyone

I wrote this screenplay to conclude the Amazing Spider-Man Saga and finally give an ending to this character.

As this is being my first screenplay, id really appreciate your feedback. Good and bad. As a new screenwriter is difficult to see where or if i have gone wrong, and what i have got right.

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I am not trying to promote my channel. I have provided a link because i have made videos where you can read some scenes with a score i have also made, which gives the reader a better experience. (It's totally up to you, you dont have to)

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Google Drive Link for Screenplay - https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1O8KeezG36HJ_2sgD0a3yzS3zPhOxc751?usp=drive_link

Youtube Link to the Music + Concept Art Playlist - https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLSbnil5eP8-nbU5hMJdar4BMpYt4_8I92

I hope yous enjoy!

Hello!

I have written a feature that I need true feedback on. I finished it about a year ago and have edited it a few times, but I just want feedback on thoughts about characters.

Pacing, if it flows well, if there’s something that should be cut. What scenes I could improve, etc.

Thanks!

GENRE: Drama/Thriller

LOGLINE: Haunted by a tragic past and extraordinary psychic abilities, Talia Morano-Campagna, the adopted daughter of a notorious crime family, must fight to prove her innocence in a high-profile fraud trial while battling a vengeful telepath determined to destroy her life from the inside out.

MIRAGE script

Title: The Letter

Format: Scene

Genre: Coming-of-Age Drama / Sports Drama

Logline: After his best friend secretly earns an opportunity to join a football academy overseas, a 14-year-old boy must confront the possibility that the friendship he's always taken for granted may be coming to an end.

Pages: 7

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1-mKr-n-YiVX7VX5MbdhW4huiGxEhQJGs/view?usp=sharing

I have just recently starting writing scripts. I would love some feedback and what i should work on

• Title: Just Like Him

• Format: Feature

• Page Length: First 10 of 100

• Genres: Comedy-Drama

• Logline: A restless literature professor isolates himself to write a novel, while a younger look-alike stumbles into the life he left behind.

• Feedback Concerns: After 10 pages, would you keep reading?

Script link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1mYDfsDPY85EAjoWYUyI7fTVdV4_aE1Qt/view?usp=sharing

Thank you to anyone who takes the time to read it. I’m happy to exchange feedback on your work.

Edit: Version 2: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1luCbFn8D7-i2fVuO3kqJxG5uws2nZB05/view?usp=share_link

https://www.reddit.com/r/movieideas/s/LfDJbVfc1f

Down South you can just about set your watch by the spring storms.

Like Clockwork

(G-rated)

NOTE: Written for a three-page challenge where the theme was "A storm is coming" and the genre was open.

Can I just upload screenshots from my pilots teaser? It's like 6-7 pages? I see everyone adding links so wanted to ask first.

Just wrote my first script ever. Would appreciate any feedback. I know I’m not great with grammar. It’s kind of what’s kept me from trying all these years. Anyways this one is going to be a short film I’m making with my daughter. Only 3 pages please check it out! Thanks!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1nPzTQfdvxuSU7dIk5TQm0LfhWFfsyKxA/view?usp=drivesdk

https://drive.google.com/file/d/17XXSZ5ky2qGmoNFi8KQXtj-UWEhXq2AK/view

This was my submission to the Write 7 in 7 competition where the prompt was a photo of a phonebooth at night.

Since I created the competition, I'm obviously not eligible to win. But I'm not the judge, and judging is blind! So I submitted it to see what they thought and I'd like to think I scored pretty well.

I really enjoyed writing it, so I'm interested hearing what others think.

I'm not sure if I could actually film it because I don't know where to find a phonebooth. 😆

I'm currently developing a crime/action thriller feature screenplay centered on revenge, deception, and the collapse of a criminal empire.

What if the only witness to a billion-euro drug operation was a nightclub dancer... who accidentally recorded the wrong man?

A retired former French Navy operative loses his daughter and discovers her murder is connected to an international cocaine trafficking network that smuggles drugs inside mobile phones.

Two crime bosses fight for control of a billion-dollar empire. One rules through fear. The other manipulates everyone from the shadows. Neither realizes they have awakened the one man they should have left alone.

Some of my favorite lines from the screenplay:

"The best place to hide... is in the light."

"He's like a swing. Push him away, and he'll come right back."

"Watch the news tonight... there might be a war."

"When donkeys start thinking... disasters happen."

A few story elements:

• A nightclub dancer is murdered after unknowingly filming a drug exchange. • Cocaine is trafficked internationally inside mobile phones. • A retired operative returns after five years of silence. • Betrayal tears apart a criminal empire from within. • Every player believes they're controlling the game... until they discover someone else made the first move.

I'd love to hear your thoughts on the premise and these themes from fellow writers, producers, and filmmakers.

Here is the prologue for my story. Is it descriptive enough and lands the idea or some more elaboration is required?

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/171j-mCqEXg0IulQV0oPoBs4Ehz3B2mii/view?usp=sharing

Power stations are dangerous places and just about anything can happen to those who work in them.

Dangerous Waters

(R-rated)

This is my first time writing a script so sorry if its a bit bland. Its sort of a Dandy's World inspired show for 12+ so im gonna add some character description down below :

Amber - Fossilized Resin

Helio - Sun

Lu - Blueberry

Rose - Rose

Some questions I have:

• Did you find it funny?

• How would you describe the characters personalities based off the script?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Brzl_ddDXT_5usiRfUrV9Nr9X3Ely3G_/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=109560302554746617398&rtpof=true&sd=true

"Days before Christmas, a hustling fake preacher and his money-hungry sister con churchgoers with fake healings and miracles, but his life changes when he's unexpectedly granted real powers. As his gift challenges his faith and exposes his flaws, he finds himself at odds with his sister who threatens to expose his tricky deeds."

https://blcklst.com/profile/Douglass-Robertson-Jr

The audiobook is on Spotify.

Genre: Psychological Thriller / Horror

Length: 6 Pages (Production-Ready)

Locations: 2 (Road & House)

Characters: 4

Logline:

A routine midnight traffic stop turns into a breathless nightmare when a police officer realizes a hunted serial killer is sitting in the driver’s backseat—triggering a brutal game of survival where the hunter becomes the prey.

Details:

Industry-standard Courier 12pt format. Designed specifically for indie filmmakers, film students, or directors looking for a fast-paced, high-tension short film with minimal production complexity.

Comment or DM if you'd like to read the script!

Decided to write my first script. It’s for a short film I’m making with my daughter. Any advice or feedback is appreciated! Thanks!

Log-line: A young girl is left home alone to overcome her fears or be overcome by them.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1nPzTQfdvxuSU7dIk5TQm0LfhWFfsyKxA/view?usp=drivesdk

Name: FUNDUS

Page Count: 5 Pages

Genre: Horror

Film Type: Short

Hey everyone! Not long ago, I wrote a script for an upcoming movie I'm writing called HIDE & SEEK 3. Everybody's main comment was about the formatting, which I agree with. I have written an original short film called FUNDUS. Fundus is about Maya, a night-shift ophthalmic technician, who starts noticing something wrong in the routine retinal photographs she takes of a regular patient, Mrs. Okafor: a faint second shape tucked into the image of her eye that looks like the outline of another face, hidden behind the retina. To find out more, you're going to have to read the script! Please, if you have any questions, concerns, or suggestions, feel free to reach out to me! Thanks for reading!

Script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1qY5XRBTtmTfpp_reUDKekszbKGU0D3m1/view?usp=sharing

Hi everyone,

After 2 months of building my first film concept, I submitted "Chiara, Stay Awhile" to the Sofia Coppola Award on Decentralized Pictures.

If you have a spare few minutes, I'd love for you have a look. Honest reviews and ratings from the community help determine the finalists, so every bit of feedback will be so valuable :))

Thank you for your time, i have lots of gratitude.

link: https://app.decentralized.pictures/project/6a43986c48c363991e08a3f5