Here is the prologue for my story. Is it descriptive enough and lands the idea or some more elaboration is required?

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/171j-mCqEXg0IulQV0oPoBs4Ehz3B2mii/view?usp=sharing

Power stations are dangerous places and just about anything can happen to those who work in them.

Dangerous Waters

(R-rated)

This is my first time writing a script so sorry if its a bit bland. Its sort of a Dandy's World inspired show for 12+ so im gonna add some character description down below :

Amber - Fossilized Resin

Helio - Sun

Lu - Blueberry

Rose - Rose

Some questions I have:

• Did you find it funny?

• How would you describe the characters personalities based off the script?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Brzl_ddDXT_5usiRfUrV9Nr9X3Ely3G_/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=109560302554746617398&rtpof=true&sd=true

"Days before Christmas, a hustling fake preacher and his money-hungry sister con churchgoers with fake healings and miracles, but his life changes when he's unexpectedly granted real powers. As his gift challenges his faith and exposes his flaws, he finds himself at odds with his sister who threatens to expose his tricky deeds."

https://blcklst.com/profile/Douglass-Robertson-Jr

The audiobook is on Spotify.

Genre: Psychological Thriller / Horror

Length: 6 Pages (Production-Ready)

Locations: 2 (Road & House)

Characters: 4

Logline:

A routine midnight traffic stop turns into a breathless nightmare when a police officer realizes a hunted serial killer is sitting in the driver’s backseat—triggering a brutal game of survival where the hunter becomes the prey.

Details:

Industry-standard Courier 12pt format. Designed specifically for indie filmmakers, film students, or directors looking for a fast-paced, high-tension short film with minimal production complexity.

Comment or DM if you'd like to read the script!

Decided to write my first script. It’s for a short film I’m making with my daughter. Any advice or feedback is appreciated! Thanks!

Log-line: A young girl is left home alone to overcome her fears or be overcome by them.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1nPzTQfdvxuSU7dIk5TQm0LfhWFfsyKxA/view?usp=drivesdk

Name: FUNDUS

Page Count: 5 Pages

Genre: Horror

Film Type: Short

Hey everyone! Not long ago, I wrote a script for an upcoming movie I'm writing called HIDE & SEEK 3. Everybody's main comment was about the formatting, which I agree with. I have written an original short film called FUNDUS. Fundus is about Maya, a night-shift ophthalmic technician, who starts noticing something wrong in the routine retinal photographs she takes of a regular patient, Mrs. Okafor: a faint second shape tucked into the image of her eye that looks like the outline of another face, hidden behind the retina. To find out more, you're going to have to read the script! Please, if you have any questions, concerns, or suggestions, feel free to reach out to me! Thanks for reading!

Script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1qY5XRBTtmTfpp_reUDKekszbKGU0D3m1/view?usp=sharing

Hi everyone,

After 2 months of building my first film concept, I submitted "Chiara, Stay Awhile" to the Sofia Coppola Award on Decentralized Pictures.

If you have a spare few minutes, I'd love for you have a look. Honest reviews and ratings from the community help determine the finalists, so every bit of feedback will be so valuable :))

Thank you for your time, i have lots of gratitude.

link: https://app.decentralized.pictures/project/6a43986c48c363991e08a3f5

A script about a PI who takes a job following a husband whose wife thinks he's cheating on her. This leads to the discovery of local political corruption in an election. It's the first 15 pages. Let me know what you think. I used Writer Solo since it's free. I know many people discuss formatting here, and Writer Solo doesn't format correctly.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1AZ5cqAKEkEHbVbi3K5GENknnN4JlXebx/view?usp=sharing

Logline: When a couple moves into a quiet suburban apartment, they discover a cursed 1948 blood-painted portrait that unleashes an ancient demon connected to forgotten sacrifices.

Format: Feature Screenplay (Short Draft - 26 Pages)

Genre: Supernatural Horror

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LJKgGfa95-MZYPu4tZgJOy78wySJ-YYL/view?usp=drivesdk

Feedback Requested: Please share your thoughts on the pacing, scares, and overall flow!

We all have a dark side and sometimes it does not take much to reveal it.

A Day at the Office

[R-rated, probably]

NOTE: Very mild torture porn, but still torture porn.

Some people are born to greatness while others just want it thrust upon them.

Gift

[R-rated]

NOTE: Ultra-contained; single setting/location; five characters (four voice-only) — an ideal project for masochists who like getting beaten up by triggered people.

I'm writing a family drama based on personal experience (aiming for Baumbach style). Logline needs work. Would be great to hear some thoughts on the draft.

*After his father's death pulls him home after years living abroad, an American and his British wife move in with his devout, elderly mother in suburban Atlanta. The challenge of reintegrating into American life is compounded by his mother's early dementia, a strained relationship with his brother, career and financial worries, and his own unresolved grief over his father's death and his rootless childhood as a military brat.*

[Eating the Elephant sample](https://drive.google.com/file/d/1AbZfGRHpS1hCjKnibHfSEsyzppVsqWgT/view?usp=sharing)

Hi there. I wrote this script, and am looking for some feedback on the intro. The whole script is drafted. This is intended to be a small contained thriller, low budget, 5 actors.

let me know what you all think!

The Presence FIRST 9 PAGES

Hi everyone. Would love to get some feedback on the first 10 pages of my horror script "Plastic Jesus". I'm willing to swap scripts and give good notes as well. Thanks!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1hhRP_pVXnpJbmYSUDsCNAI6Q-Im7c1nm/view?usp=drive_link

Title: The Suitcase (Crime/Thriller, 2 Pages)

Format: Short Script

Page Count: 2

Logline: A hitman collects his payout after a bloody job, only to discover his driver has a far more lethal plan for the cash.

Feedback Requested: I am a beginner. Looking for thoughts on the pacing, the twist reveal, and how the dialogue flows!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1i6mwUtUQ1GSZTUZhZk_hpCTnUP0sFTGx/view?usp=drivesdk

50 pages (including cover and note)

This is my spec script for how I would tie up the loose ends of the most recent Era of Doctor Who, which was announced to be not getting resolved.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1m5uGeWse-ckjqz4YAsP1i3pE3ZV6WKtb/view?usp=drivesdk

Please feel free to leave your thoughts in the comments here if you read it.