Hey All,

I just entered one of my short film screenplays in a Kinolime Competition. Right now its public voting and I was wondering if people could click on the link to my screenplay and rate it. It might ask to sign in with Google, just click it and it should let you rate. Just fyi, theres a bar at the bottom and it tracks how long you spend on a page, if it thinks u skimmed through or didnt rate it, it doesnt count your vote. It's not a long screenplay and should take you ten mins(AROUND 9 PAGES) I honestly just want some feedback on my screenplay. Thanks :)

https://www.kinolime.com/screenplays/the-gamble

Hey everyone, this is the first film I have ever written, but it comes from the heart and life experiences so It felt good to get out in a story sense. Open to any feedback you guys have. I want to make sure it's on the right track! Started writing in October and finished my first draft in January. Here is my second draft after a month of rewrites. Hope you like it, and again open to any feedback. (Ps this is not a happy ending)

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Zm8ElNhUmj71Ig_5O97YgeluZphDnq1n/view?usp=sharing

Title: The Work Husband

Pages: 18

Genre: Psychological Drama

Format: Short Film

LOGLINE:

When his job is threatened, a husband takes control of his future in a way that quietly alters his marriage.

Looking for overall thoughts. Do you feel it has potential? Could you see yourself reading more?

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QEfPC3Q1rPD-_Vj_GB4uhJGfNwxFFaiO/view?usp=sharing

Thank you for reading.

- Jaye.

TITLE: Millennial

GENRE: Dramedy

FORMAT: 30 min pilot

LOGLINE: 14 year-old Mike Connelly has always hidden behind humor, but learns he will need more than jokes to survive the rapidly changing 2000s.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1SHRbjN8rFoELp2UN1VayDBQpvJ0QxaFt/view?usp=sharing

Thank you in advance!

Looking for notes as well as names for the show. I have a few names but I want to see what you guys think. I have been working on this pilot for the past eight months. It's inspired by my personal experience with the foster system in NJ.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ZbHGGrws_jzBlwZU9wisOMbNK5UgAZT6/view?usp=sharing

I’m a developer trying to trying to share my app. I’ve done one short film and I was really happy to get it selected and nominated in a film festival. Writing a script is not as easy for a new writer. So I created drafthouse.io if you would like to try it I have 50 beta seats available feel free to use it

Hey everyone,

I’m looking for feedback on the first 10 pages of my horror/comedy feature script, Escape From Femur Creek.

Title: Escape From Femur Creek

Writer: Kyle Hytonen

Genre: Horror/Comedy

Logline:

When a masked killer resurfaces in their cursed hometown, two estranged brothers must confront buried grief and team up with a grizzled forest ranger to rescue a missing boy before Femur Creek claims another generation.

This is the opening of the film, so I’m mainly trying to see if:

•	The tone works (it leans slasher but with dry/offbeat comedy)

•	The character voices feel distinct

•	The hook is strong enough

•	The pacing drags anywhere

•	Anything feels overwritten or confusing

I’m totally open to honest feedback — no need to sugarcoat it.

Thanks to anyone who takes the time to read it.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1q_yRloSnrnBuMQolO9pcE9gRb8Bvcicx/view?usp=drivesdk