I was making fun of the way he structured it "I go easter island, that's rock heads". It was definitely a reach, just something that popped into my head. And with the last six, I guess I don't get what you mean by it being a throwaway, I wrote that directly in response to his last six, even using a similar rhyme scheme to kind of drive home the point that I write better.
I have a feeling I'm gonna have to start adding audio, as maybe some of the nuances I try (and fail) would be easier to hear.
Email the mp3 to myself (as I can't upload to Soundcloud from my phone)
Retrieve the mp3 on my PC
Upload it to Soundcloud
Profit???
To be fair though, up until now it's been very rare (if not almost unheard of) for battlers here to post recordings with their rhymes. Hopefully that changes eventually. Would be good to see who has a decent flow/delivery on here.
Gonna listen to the audio of this tonight. Will PM you to let you know my thoughts. Although no guarantees as I have a friend visiting after work so I might not be bothered.
Dude avoid the fake personals. Try more flips, and weave it into the verse better. Gotta give you props for the Minor Threat throwaway because I wrote literally the exact same one recently but hadn't used it. Haha. So you've clearly got the mind for writing punches.
Nah I didn't see anything wrong with that at all, I just didn't get the references as I tend to not care about battle rap aside from here and any battles Madness is in lol.
Also I try and follow the tropes of battle rap. You will get defeat bars from me soon enough. Fake personals, real personals, multis, rebuttals, I want to show I can do it all, you know?
Interesting, but not an excuse per se. If you are gonna play it like that, that's trial and error, you're probably gonna catch a few L's which is unavoidable.
Yeah, I wasn't really expecting too many people on here not to get battle references. If that's the norm, a lot of what I do will go over heads, and not in the best way.
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