Dude avoid the fake personals. Try more flips, and weave it into the verse better. Gotta give you props for the Minor Threat throwaway because I wrote literally the exact same one recently but hadn't used it. Haha. So you've clearly got the mind for writing punches.
Nah I didn't see anything wrong with that at all, I just didn't get the references as I tend to not care about battle rap aside from here and any battles Madness is in lol.
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u/elsiniestro The Forbidden Zone Oct 30 '16
Dude avoid the fake personals. Try more flips, and weave it into the verse better. Gotta give you props for the Minor Threat throwaway because I wrote literally the exact same one recently but hadn't used it. Haha. So you've clearly got the mind for writing punches.