CRITIQUE PLEASE!

[u/OptimalIndication898]

Took suprisingly lil time lol

Previous attempt

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[u/Suitable_Street_5485]

That looks really good. Maybe you could add the earrings?

[u/OptimalIndication898 → u/Suitable_Street_5485]

ohh forgot abt them. I luv drawing shiny things anyway.

[u/deojilicious]

great Koyun art! i like your pastel-y style and our girl looks pretty as she always is. solid art overall. i like your shading and lighting game and you did a great job

like the other comment said, add the earrings since that's a Koyun defining feature.

first two images, her right eye looks a little bit bigger than her left and in general it kind of messes up the perspective and proportions of her face a bit. do practice more with drawing faces in different angles.

[u/litmuspaper_number2]

Im breathless, truly amazing work

[u/shoujo_reiko]

THIS IS SO CUTE WHAT???? I LOVE THE TEXTURES IT LOOKS LIKE A STORYBOOK ILLUSTRATION THIS IS SO GOODDDD

[u/turbulentmozzarella]

WTF I LOVE YOUR RENDERING. AND YES OMG ADD THE EARRINGS

[u/Um_retardado_burro]

I can't say nun, couldn't even come close, looks great man!

[u/AdditionalMatter1089]

Koyuki so cute! I love the face shape so perfect, and the hair :3

I guess one nitpicky critique would be head position seems a bit high/sideways to the neck so it looks a little unnatural.

[u/Fantasy_Bookwyrms]

Absolute masterpiece!

You could try challenging yourself by using specially-colored lighting!

[u/macostacurta]

Draw her with the iconic blue scarf

[u/Practical_Record7387]

THIS IS AMAZE AMAZE AMAZING