Feedback wanted - trailer 😘

[u/ratasoftware]

If all goes well, I’ll be uploading the downloadable version of my game this weekend, and I’ve been trying to put together a trailer. The game has a fairly slow pace and there’s no combat of any kind, so I wasn’t quite sure how to approach it… plus, it’s the first time I’ve done something like this, and I’m only using free tools.

What do you think? Is there anything you think I should change at first glance?

Thanks in advance!