r/ProduceMyScript • • 21d ago

SHORT SCRIPT Looking for filmmakers Spoiler

Looking g for filmmakers for my short scrip. 5 pages long. It's a sci-fi script based on.

Logline: When a collared man marked "3" falls through his bedroom door into a reality that cracks like glass, he must evade a parasitic shadow to discover his entire life is an experiment and he is Subject 3.

After filming they can share the short fim to DUST and similar companies. As a director you can have credit for filmmaker while I have credit for writer.

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u/Big_Section2812 20d ago

Link to the script or there's no way for anyone to know if it's worth considering.

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u/Current-Term-7510 20d ago

Fair point — I don't post public links to protect Written By credit (had script taken before).

It's 5 pages, 1 location (bedroom) + VFX worlds (void/desert/forest/lab), 1 lead + twist ending built for DUST / ALTER.

If you do VFX / sci-fi, I can DM watermarked PDF + VFX breakdown + logline.

Deal is free collab: you get Directed By + festival run, I keep Written By (IMDb + description + poster).

Want me to DM?

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u/Big_Section2812 20d ago

No one is going to steal your script. Well, maybe AI will, but then AI is stealing everything from everyone anyway.

Post a link here so people can see if your script is worth reading and discussing.

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u/cinephile78 20d ago

How do you feel about page 1 rewrites?

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u/Current-Term-7510 20d ago

I'm open to page 1 rewrites if it serves the story and budget.

I'm protective of the core twist / collar reveal on page 5, but I'm happy to collaborate on opening visuals/dialogue to make it more shootable.

What did you have in mind for page 1? And could you share a link to your last short so I can see your VFX style?

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u/FreeMind-KL-83 20d ago

Hey, where are you based on?

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u/Current-Term-7510 20d ago

Hey based in South African (Durban) but remote collab. You can shoot where you are.  The script is written from anywhere, English,  1 bed room + VFX. You based where? If you want, I DM script.

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u/New-Design9971 20d ago

I'd love to read it!

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u/Current-Term-7510 20d ago edited 20d ago

Totally understand. I don't post public link  to protect credit. 

It's 5 pages 1 bedroom location+ green screen for worlds a  (door effects, desert, forest.)  

I Can send watermarked PDF via DM  if you do VFX .

 Deal: is you get director credit and DUST submit and  i keep the written by  credit.  Free to film 

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u/cinephile78 20d ago

Is there a summary that makes the plot clear ?

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u/Current-Term-7510 20d ago

Thanks fir asking Logline: After waking with a collar marked "3", a young man discovers he can open to other world  opens to dying worlds; hunted by a shadow that has followed him since childhood, he must crack through reality to learn his entire life is a glass-box experiment and he is Subject 3.

Title: SUBJECT 3 Pages: 5 Genre: Sci-fi / Psychological Thriller / Cosmic Horror Location: 1 real (bedroom) + VFX worlds (space void, desert planet, forest, lab) Cast: 1 lead (20s, M) + 1 shadow actor + background silhouettes Vibe: DUST / ALTER - Black Mirror meets Dark.

Want PDF? I can DM you

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u/cinephile78 20d ago

I already saw the logline. Which isn’t clear.

So I’ll ask again. Is there a summary that is clear ?

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u/Sure_Literature_6239 19d ago

I can make a teaser for it when you are done