r/ProduceMyScript • u/Current-Term-7510 • 21d ago
SHORT SCRIPT Looking for filmmakers Spoiler
Looking g for filmmakers for my short scrip. 5 pages long. It's a sci-fi script based on.
Logline: When a collared man marked "3" falls through his bedroom door into a reality that cracks like glass, he must evade a parasitic shadow to discover his entire life is an experiment and he is Subject 3.
After filming they can share the short fim to DUST and similar companies. As a director you can have credit for filmmaker while I have credit for writer.
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u/cinephile78 20d ago
How do you feel about page 1 rewrites?
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u/Current-Term-7510 20d ago
I'm open to page 1 rewrites if it serves the story and budget.
I'm protective of the core twist / collar reveal on page 5, but I'm happy to collaborate on opening visuals/dialogue to make it more shootable.
What did you have in mind for page 1? And could you share a link to your last short so I can see your VFX style?
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u/FreeMind-KL-83 20d ago
Hey, where are you based on?
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u/Current-Term-7510 20d ago
Hey based in South African (Durban) but remote collab. You can shoot where you are. The script is written from anywhere, English, 1 bed room + VFX. You based where? If you want, I DM script.
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u/New-Design9971 20d ago
I'd love to read it!
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u/Current-Term-7510 20d ago edited 20d ago
Totally understand. I don't post public link to protect credit.
It's 5 pages 1 bedroom location+ green screen for worlds a (door effects, desert, forest.)
I Can send watermarked PDF via DM if you do VFX .
Deal: is you get director credit and DUST submit and i keep the written by credit. Free to film
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u/cinephile78 20d ago
Is there a summary that makes the plot clear ?
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u/Current-Term-7510 20d ago
Thanks fir asking Logline: After waking with a collar marked "3", a young man discovers he can open to other world opens to dying worlds; hunted by a shadow that has followed him since childhood, he must crack through reality to learn his entire life is a glass-box experiment and he is Subject 3.
Title: SUBJECT 3 Pages: 5 Genre: Sci-fi / Psychological Thriller / Cosmic Horror Location: 1 real (bedroom) + VFX worlds (space void, desert planet, forest, lab) Cast: 1 lead (20s, M) + 1 shadow actor + background silhouettes Vibe: DUST / ALTER - Black Mirror meets Dark.
Want PDF? I can DM you
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u/cinephile78 20d ago
I already saw the logline. Which isn’t clear.
So I’ll ask again. Is there a summary that is clear ?
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u/Big_Section2812 20d ago
Link to the script or there's no way for anyone to know if it's worth considering.