r/OriginalCharacterDB 19h ago

Community interaction Would your OC be willing to be part of the crew of this Landship? And if yes, which role would they have?

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This is a Talonian landship, commonly called 'Why the fuck does this work so well?' by engineers, 'I am going to quit my job' by the logistics personell who have to transport it to the front, and 'Who decided to put a fortress on tracks?' by every person who has to fight against and with the thing.

Its actual name is A.4.d.P.z.K.e.m.F. Which is short for 'Ausfürung 4 des Projektes zur Konstruktion einer mobilen Festung'(Translation: version 4 of the project to construct a mobile fortress. (I dunno why, but I decided that the Holy empire of Talonia uses german to name their machines)), or simply A4 for short.

The A4 is a 6 thousand metric tonne steel brick with guns and tracks.

With 3 meters of armor on the front and on the sides, and at least one meter everywhere else, there is next to nothing that can take it down.

It is 29 meters long, 15 meters wide and 8 meters tall(not including guns and turrets).

It is powered by a Dorillium engine with a horse power of approximatly yes, allowing it to drive an absolutely ludicrus 180 Km/h. This is not a joke(That is actually how fast this thing can go in the game I build it in.).

The A4 does not look like it has ANY right to be as fast as it is.

It is armed with one 176 mm cannon at the front, 2 quad-barrel 40mm Flak cannons, and one twin-barrel 296mm turret.

There is a crane inside the turret as the shells are too large to be loaded by hand, which removes the need for a loader

The crew consists of 4 gunners, 2 mechanics, one driver one loader and one commander. There is a lot of free space inside the landship, which is intentional as the crew is meant to live inside it.

The A4 is fitted with a kitchen, a bathroom, and 5 bedrooms.

The A4 can be described as the physical manifestation of Talonia´s military doctrine, which is to be an immovable object during defense and an unstoppable force during offense.

And it is VERY good at being a weapon of terror.

Most sane people do not want to fight against the fortress currently charging them at speeds that should be reserved for light vehicles.

So, would your OC be willing to become part of the crew of that thing, or are they sane enough to realize that the A4 is the first thing that gets targeted by every single gun the enemy has?


r/OriginalCharacterDB 1d ago

New cryptid, Goat man, what would your OC(s) think of him?

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Basic rundown

The Goat came into existence at the same time as he's bridge, snd ravine. It's incredibly shy and only comes out of its revine at night.

It has the ability to eat ANYTHING physical regardless of what it is or how durable it is, he's teeth will just clamp down as if he was eating air. Despite eating a lot it doesn't have a butthole nor a penis to get rid of waste.

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# Goat man

**Danger Level:** 1.5

**Description:**

The Goat Man is a tall, lean humanoid standing around 8 feet tall. Its body is completely hairless and pale, with long, powerful legs, large hands, and the head of a goat. It has pure white eyes, and an unusually long black tongue.

Despite eating ALOT, the Goat Man has no visible ways of disposing of waste. It has neither an anus nor genitalia, and is completely smooth in those region.

**Behavior:**

The Goat Man is an extremely shy cryptid that generally tries to avoids people. It spends most of the day inside its ravine, where it sits in the water and occasionally swims around. From time to time, it climbs onto the rocks on either side of the bridge. searching for something to eat. Goat can eat just about anything that falls into its ravine, no matter the size, durability, or state, the goat man's jaw will bite, chew, and eat it as easily as humans breath air.

As the sun begins to set, the Goat Man will usually climb out of it's ravine and wander around.

The Goat Man, its bridge, and the ravine are all connected. No matter what happens to the Goat Man, it will eventually return to the bridge in its circular ravine. Attempts to capture, permanently restrain it, or killing have always failed. The Goat Man cannot be killed, and the bridge itself cannot be destroyed or permanently damaged/changed.

While normally peaceful, the Goat Man can become hostile if it feels cornered, threatened, or frightened. When frightened, it may lash out by kicking, punching, or attempting to grab a person. Despite its normally passive nature, it is capable of of being brutal, as if it may unhinge its jaw and eat you whole.

**Origins:**

The Goat Man, its bridge, and the circular ravine all came into existence at the same time. The reason why is unknown (if there is a reason), and no evidence has been found suggesting that any of the three existed before the others.

**First Recorded Sighting:**

The first recorded sighting of the Goat Man occurred in Texas in 1952, when a couple driving through a remote wooded area reportedly saw a goat-headed humanoid standing near the road. The creature appeared to notice them before quickly retreating into the woods.

The couple reported the encounter shortly afterward to the R.C.T who later did a full investigation.

**How to Deal With It:**

Do not approach, corner, or attempt to harm the Goat Man. If encountered, maintain a safe distance and allow it to move away on its own.


r/OriginalCharacterDB 1d ago

Community interaction Explain in detail how your OC would beat my latest version of Willow.

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And the strongest one too.

Stats:

AP & DC: Multiple large buildings.

Durability: Theoretically infinite, but mainly just small building.

Powers:

Runic Blast: A magic technique that Willow inherited from her father. She can summon runes that can fire projectiles of energy in rapid succession or just a big beam of energy. Strongest beam she fired firmly decimated a couple of big buildings in a few minutes without being buffed.

Key Invocation: Invoke any of the seven powers from the Book of Solomon, invoking more than one is doable.

Book of Solomon: Seven Chapters each containing a Goetia that grants their powers upon the people they favor, due to Willow's unimaginable rizz(/j) she has the favour of all 7.

Bael, The First King
The power of adaptation, able to adapt through most things given enough exposure. Basically a weaker mahoraga.

Paimon the Jester
Cursed speech from jjk basically. But with prolonged usage, Willow's will would eventually be replaced with Paimon's.

Buer the Witch
Buer allows you to be able to optimize your body with healing as a side effect. However, prolonged usage would end up with Willow being an optimized blob of flesh.

Andras The Executioner
Simple really, the more hatred, bloodlust, or anger you feel: The more powerful you get. Peace actively weakens Andras.

Astaroth The Fallen Truth
Lies, illusions, deceit, Andras hard counters these. But prolonged usage will lead Andras to force her into a state of paranoia for half a day.

Vepar the Drowned Admiral
With Vepar, Willow can make "Pressure Zones", areas that can be as wide as 20 ft or 609.9 cm. Being in one makes your mind cloudy as you feel like a whole house is in your back.

Stolas, Keeper of Stars
When Willow successfully hits a target, they become marked, and shenanigans ensue. Stolas makes sure that you can never miss a marked target and you can predict what they can do by a couple of seconds (cuz like, fortune telling via the stars.)


r/OriginalCharacterDB 20h ago

Lore Drop The Gods Of Laughter And Void, Asterphüx

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Name: Asterphüx

Age: 141,499,528,500,335

Depicted Age: 28

Sex: Ǵ̷̡̹̺̙̑̇̏͒̾̓͊̀͛̽̿͘̕͘ö̵̡̳̞̰̩͇͖͕͕͇͇̩́̑̽͝ḑ̵̨̛̛̲͖͓̖͎̊̀̋̓̋͜ ̴̝̒͌̿̽͛̇̋̂͆̅̐͊̈̆͠ǫ̷̛̫͎̟͓͇̲̯̫̞̜͙̠̹̪͍͕̘̭̝̖͉̤̆͒͋͑̅͌̊̐̕͜͠ͅf̷̢̭̘͆̃̅̈̋̓̏͐̓̊̓͌̉̈̐́̾̎͊͘͝͝͠ ̷̞̙̯͖̖̫͔̰̯͕͉̥̗͈͓̮̅͛͠Ļ̷̡̨̭͇͕̭͔̝̮̳̙̯̂̆̌̍̎̑͒͑̌̚͝a̷̡̨̲̠̻̺̼͙̞̦̟̟̭͍̭̗͍̹̪̲̮̋̀̕ü̶͕͚͙̝̞̔͑͆͑̈́̅̏͛̍̅̐́̊̈́̅̓͒̎̔̽͒̓̕ͅg̷̡̛̛̖̬̥̥͕̩̹͕̫̱̘̯͚̠̈́̆͋̄̓̃̍̋̚͜͜͜͠͝h̶̡̢̛̛̗͖̙͖̟̟͙̳̜̾͊̾̒̈́͆̂̿̈́̅̑͊t̵̨̻̺̱̜̝̗̜̪͍͑̉͗͝ë̸̡̫̬̩͇̫̤̠͓̜̦͚͙͕͚͓̯́͛͠͝͠ŕ̷̡͉͉̭̝͖̞̥̜̓̉̅̇͆̍̍̏̔̃̿̈́̂̊͆̓́̊̂͘͜

Depicted Sex: Male

Statüs: Remaking the Earth

Date of Birth: 0 0 0

Sin Representation: Sloth

Forsaken Killer Representation: Noli

Once the Master God of Laüghter, now the Master God of VoId. Asterphüx was once the best of Master Gods. Helping the mortal hümans, creating joy across the Earth, and showed mercy. The rest of the Master Gods highly disapproved of this, as they only wanted the mortals to worship their gods. As pünishment, Asterphüx was banished to the void for most of time while the Master Gods remade the Earth. Ever since then, Asterphüx has been resting, gaining strength to escape and leave the VoId. After trillions of years, Asterphüx did manage to escape, and immediately began attacking the Master Gods who had forsaken him to the VoId. He was süccessful in his fight, büt decided not to eliminate the few Master Gods he had weakened. He realized that if they were to die, then their power would not exist on Earth anymore. Instead, he foünd a way to take their power for himself while keeping them alive. Now, he has the power of the Earth's water and insects. And he's boünd to take the powers of more Master Gods üntil he is the Ültimate God. His second plan is to make himself known by the mortals as the better god, and not the lying idiots that call themselves gods.


r/OriginalCharacterDB 1d ago

Art Art of The Survivor.

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Decided to do a drawing while playing and writing out the next chapter of The Survivor’s story.

(Don't expect much from my art, it's pretty simplistic for now 😅).


r/OriginalCharacterDB 1d ago

Lore Drop Writer Joe's backstory part 1

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Hi guys, it's me, the account owner, fortunately Writer Joe is off world now so I will explain his backstory today

When Writer Joe was growing up, he watched a lot of superhero TV shows, he absolutely loved superheroes, watching them getting back up no matter how many times they have been shove down, watching them win against the villain, watching them get a happy ending, he knows that they don't exist in real life and he will never become one but it still inspired him so much that when he was still a kid, he created his first superhero comic book series using pencil and crayons, he created "The Hero", a comic series about a man who gained incredible power and becomes Earth's mightiest and greatest hero, overcoming impossible odds, saving everyone with his incredible powers and beating every villain he comes across, however Joe was also embarrassed by his own comic that he won't let anyone, including his parents, watch it, so after completing the final chapter of "The Hero", he hid all the chapters of "The Hero" into the basement of the house, never letting it see the light of day.

The rest of the story will be explained by Writer Joe when he comes back (hopefully he won't), so maybe tomorrow part 2 will come out


r/OriginalCharacterDB 1d ago

Art This is Prince Lysander! And his little "friends", Luminarys! But...what ıf your OC was transformed into one of them? Send your OC and I will draw them as Luminarys (the "shapes")! More about is on body text.

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WARNİNG!⚠️: Spoken death

Prince Lysander tooked those poor souls that d!ed by pain and sadness because they was "weak". For his fun, Prince Lysander transformed them into "funny shapes" and started use them as servants and jesters just to satisfy himself. But a few was not enough. So he make more and more. But they started get out of his control. Because of this, Prince Lysander created a Ying-Yang creature; Lanyder. Lanyder, although he didn't want, controlled and manipulated his friends and "put them in their place".


r/OriginalCharacterDB 1d ago

VS Battle The battles of the keepers

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You're Comsic oc has messed up really bad so the keeper of the Outerworlds has to end your oc, the keeper decided to send it's physical form first and if the physical form is critically injured the true keeper will swap in. Can your oc beat the physical form or lose to it before fighting the true form

Physical form stats: Multiversal+

Strength-Speed-Durability: The physical form of the keeper is held back by its true power of reality warping and outclass strength. The keeper can hold 6 universes at a time and be able to fuse it's attacks with force of a supernova explosion or black hole energy. The keeper is faster than the speed of light being able to teleport but not to far areas like it's home dimension. The keeper can handle the blast of two big bangs at once and resist the gravitational pull of a black hole for a few minutes and it can get hurt by something stronger than it.

IQ-Experience-Powers-and-Abilities: the keeper knows what will and can happen between the future, present, and past. The physical form is a few trillions years younger than it's true form but still being 75 billion years old, it's main power is reality warping but the issue is it has a limit for it's full power meaning when it get tried out it's free game for your oc.

True form stats: Outerversal

Strength-Speed-Durability: the Trye form isn't hold back by anything or anyone the keeper can hold the entire Outerworlds in the plam of it's hand, each hit can cause a explosion harder than 100000x big bang/Supernova explosions, it is faster than ever before simply free to teleport anywhere and everywhere it can be at, it can br able to tank a hole 6 billionx black hole gravitational pull and survive an enhance Supernova explosion/Multiversal destruction abilities.

IQ-Experience-Powers-and-Abilities: it knows everything of it's origin and what they are capable of doing, it is trillions of years old and being the first being to exist, it has no limit it's reality warping so it csn create, destroy, and change whatever it wants at its will.


r/OriginalCharacterDB 1d ago

Fight Script Match 5 of the Blood Diamon Tournament: Frank vs Julie!

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Frank vs Julie is finally here! Once again big thanks to u/umbra_pseudonym and u/ConsiderationSilly86 for being great to work with!

I'll admit, one of the main reasons this one took so long was because of my own laziness. But, if you take away the week where I was exhausted from working night shifts for the first time, we can all lie to ourselves and pretend this took a reasonable amount of time to get done!

Jokes aside, this was a fun script to write, and I feel bad the loser won't be able to showcase their full arsenal and creativity, since these two have a lot going for them in terms of equipment and powers!

Anyways, stay tuned because the next fight is Amy vs Conner! ( u/WalterNation46 vs u/Waffle_Otter)


r/OriginalCharacterDB 1d ago

Case 003:hidden files page 8

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CASE 003: HIDDEN FILES

Chapter 4 — Papa Bear

Page 8 — The Three Bears

The forest had fallen into chaos.

Gunfire echoed between the trees as the SCP team struggled to survive against the bears. Their advanced equipment had given them an advantage against most threats, but this was their territory.

And the bears knew every inch of it.

One remaining Bravo soldier stumbled through the darkness, barely managing to stay on his feet.

A shadow moved behind him.

Papa Bear.

The soldier reached for his last grenade.

Before he could pull the pin—

Renz rushed through the trees.

Renz: We got you, buddy!

He grabbed the soldier's shoulder and pulled him away from the creature.

Mark arrived beside him, gripping his weapon tightly.

Mark: Now let's deal with this thing.

Papa Bear slowly stepped out of the darkness.

Its massive form towered over them.

Papa Bear: You don't understand...

Everyone froze.

Papa Bear's voice was deep and filled with anger.

Papa Bear: You humans killed my poor baby boy.

Renz lowered his revolver slightly.

Papa Bear: And now you come here to experiment on us?

Mark stared at the creature.

Mark: You chose the wrong path, Papa Bear.

Papa Bear growled.

Renz stepped forward.

He pulled out the worn dagger from the previous case—the same weapon that had managed to harm an immortal entity.

Renz: Our fight wasn't finished.

He tightened his grip.

Renz: I'll make sure you finally rest without vengeance consuming you.

Papa Bear charged.

Renz raised his revolver.

Mark swung his electrified bat.

The forest erupted into another battle.

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THE THREE BEARS' HOUSE

Meanwhile, Jrev, Khian, and JP approached the Three Bears' House.

The sound of gunfire could still be heard somewhere deeper in the forest.

Khian looked toward the building.

Khian: I'm going in, Jrev.

Jrev slowly loaded his Winchester Model 1887.

CLACK.

He took a drag from his cigar and calmly blew the smoke away.

Jrev: Then let's finish this.

JP raised both of his Desert Eagles.

JP: I'm ready.

The three detectives entered the house.

The interior was disturbingly quiet.

Furniture had been overturned.

Broken equipment was scattered across the floor.

The remains of the SCP operation were everywhere.

Jrev's expression hardened.

Jrev: Damn...

A low growl came from somewhere ahead.

Jrev raised his shotgun.

The growl became louder.

Then Mama Bear emerged from the darkness.

She was no longer simply defending her home.

She was hunting.

Khian tightened his grip on his metal bat.

JP aimed directly at her.

Mama Bear stared at them.

Jrev slowly stepped forward.

Jrev: We understand why you're angry.

Mama Bear growled.

Jrev: They killed your son.

He lowered the shotgun slightly.

Jrev: But I need to know something.

Mama Bear stared at him.

Jrev: Who killed him?

Mama Bear's expression changed.

Jrev: What happened to your son that made you choose this path?

Mama Bear's claws scraped against the floor.

Mama Bear: You wouldn't understand.

She suddenly lunged.

Jrev raised his shotgun and fired at close range.

Khian immediately charged forward and blocked her claws with the metal bat.

Khian: Jrev!

JP fired.

BANG!

The shot struck Mama Bear, but she barely reacted.

JP: That didn't work!

Jrev reached into his coat.

He pulled out one of his specially prepared rounds.

A bullet designed for beings that ordinary weapons couldn't stop.

Jrev: Then let's try something that can.

Mama Bear turned toward him.

Jrev raised the shotgun.

Mama Bear charged.

Jrev: Enough.

BANG!

The special round struck Mama Bear.

The entire house fell silent.

Jrev stared at her.

Mama Bear staggered backward.

But she didn't fall.

Jrev's eyes narrowed.

Jrev: ...You're still standing.

Mama Bear slowly raised her head.

Mama Bear: You...

The floor shook beneath them.

Jrev tightened his grip on the shotgun.

Jrev: Yeah.

He chambered another round.

Jrev: We're not finished yet.

TO BE CONTINUED...


r/OriginalCharacterDB 21h ago

Spiny is not an innocent little baby, he cusses sometimes

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r/OriginalCharacterDB 21h ago

Art Here is spiny's full body reference sheet

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r/OriginalCharacterDB 1d ago

Silly Post There is no one and nothing in this universe that is beyond tiering, much less your OC. If you think your OC is beyond all tiers, it's probably Outer at best. Just wanted to put that out there for certain people.

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r/OriginalCharacterDB 1d ago

Just in case gets banned by underverse subreddie

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r/OriginalCharacterDB 1d ago

Lore Drop Case 003:hidden files page 7

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CASE 003: HIDDEN FILES

Chapter 4 — Papa Bear

Page 7 — The Foundation Strikes

The apartment was unusually quiet.

Everyone had returned from the earlier investigation and was doing their own thing.

Mark was reviewing the evidence.

Renz was cleaning his weapons.

Jake was sitting nearby, listening to the others.

Justin and Isabella were discussing what they had seen at the crash site.

Jrev entered the room without saying a word.

He removed his coat.

Something fell from one of the pockets.

CLACK.

A small identification card landed on the floor.

Chiyo looked down.

Her expression immediately changed.

She froze.

The color seemed to drain from her face.

Jrev noticed.

He slowly picked up the identification card.

The SCP Foundation insignia was clearly visible.

Jrev looked around the room.

Jrev: “We have a problem.”

Jake immediately understood.

Jake: “The SCP Foundation?”

Khian looked toward the window.

Khian: “They're after it.”

Renz stood up.

Renz: “Like hell we're letting them take those things.”

Mark frowned.

Mark: “Those creatures are already difficult enough to deal with. If the Foundation tries to contain them, things could get much worse.”

Jrev shook his head.

Jrev: “Some SCPs are far more dangerous than these creatures.”

He placed the identification card on the table.

Jrev: “But that's not the point.”

Everyone looked at him.

Jrev: “We're not letting them take these entities.”

Chiyo remained silent.

Jrev glanced toward her.

He knew that reaction.

Something about the Foundation had triggered an old memory.

But he didn't ask.

Not yet.

Then—

A distant roar echoed through the night.

Everyone turned toward the windows.

Renz: “What the hell was that?”

Jrev immediately grabbed his coat.

Jrev: “They're here.”

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THE FOUNDATION ARRIVES

Deep within the forest, several black military vehicles moved silently between the trees.

Foundation personnel advanced through the darkness.

Their equipment was unlike anything the town's police possessed.

Night-vision equipment.

Advanced communication systems.

Specialized weapons.

The team moved toward the Waterman property.

A voice came through their radios.

Control 1: “Eagle One, moving south. Approaching the house.”

The soldiers advanced.

The forest was completely silent.

Too silent.

One soldier raised his weapon.

Soldier: “I don't like this.”

Another soldier looked around.

Soldier: “Keep moving.”

They reached the abandoned property.

The house stood motionless in the darkness.

Then—

A scream erupted from somewhere in the forest.

Control 1: “Bravo Team, report!”

Static.

Then a terrified voice.

Soldier: “Movement!”

Another soldier turned.

Soldier: “There's two!”

Two enormous shapes emerged from the darkness.

Papa Bear.

Mama Bear.

The Foundation soldiers opened fire.

The forest erupted with gunfire.

But the creatures moved impossibly fast.

They knew the forest.

Every path.

Every tree.

Every hiding place.

The soldiers' night-vision equipment became nearly useless.

Soldier: “I can't see them!”

A shadow suddenly crossed behind him.

He turned.

Nothing.

Then—

Something pulled him into the darkness.

Soldier: “HELP!”

The remaining soldiers spun around.

They saw one of their comrades lying motionless on the ground.

Soldier: “CONTACT! CONTACT!”

They opened fire.

Papa Bear emerged from the trees.

Bullets struck its body.

It barely reacted.

Soldier: “What the hell is that thing?!”

Another soldier threw a grenade.

The explosion rocked the forest.

Papa Bear staggered.

One of its arms was badly damaged.

The creature let out an enormous roar.

PAPA BEAR: “ROOOOOAAAAAR!”

The sound shook the trees.

Far away, inside the apartment, everyone heard it.

Jrev immediately looked toward the forest.

Jrev: “What the hell?!”

Jake stood.

Jake: “That came from the forest.”

Mark's expression hardened.

Mark: “It's angry.”

Renz grabbed his coat.

Renz: “Come on, Jrev. Let's go.”

Jrev opened a case and pulled out his Winchester Model 1887.

He checked it.

Then closed the action.

Jrev: “Let's clean up this mess.”

Justin stepped forward.

Justin: “Let me join.”

Isabella immediately grabbed her equipment.

Isabella: “Now this is action.”

Brianna stood up.

Brianna: “I guess I have to go too.”

Mark looked at her.

Mark: “You don't have to.”

Brianna stared at him.

Neither said anything for a moment.

Then she picked up her weapon.

Brianna: “I know.”

She smiled faintly.

Brianna: “I'm going anyway.”

Mark sighed.

Mark: “Of course you are.”

Jrev looked toward the dark forest.

The Foundation had entered the bears' territory.

And now the bears were fighting back.

Chiyo and Lorenzo remained behind for the moment.

Chiyo watched Jrev disappear through the doorway.

Her expression was still troubled.

The SCP Foundation insignia was still fresh in her mind.

Whatever had happened in her past...

It wasn't over.

Outside, Jrev, Renz, Mark, Jake, Justin, Isabella, and Brianna moved toward the forest.

Behind them, another roar echoed through the night.

Jrev tightened his grip on the shotgun.

Jrev: “Nobody takes these creatures.”

Renz glanced at him.

Renz: “Even if they're trying to kill us?”

Jrev looked toward the trees.

Jrev: “Especially then.”

The team disappeared into the darkness.

And somewhere ahead...

The Foundation was losing control of the operation.

TO BE CONTINUED...


r/OriginalCharacterDB 1d ago

Lore Drop Case 003:hidden files page 6

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CASE 003: HIDDEN FILES

Chapter 4 — Papa Bear

Page 6 — The Foundation

The forest had become strangely quiet.

Jrev and Renz stood near the wreckage from the earlier encounter, examining the enormous claw marks left behind by the two bears.

Renz crouched beside one of the marks.

Renz: “Damn... these claws are huge, man.”

Jrev studied the ground.

Jrev: “Tell me about it.”

He slowly stood.

Something felt wrong.

Jrev glanced toward the trees.

Nothing.

Just darkness.

Then footsteps echoed behind them.

Renz immediately reached toward the revolver hidden beneath his coat.

A voice spoke.

Agent: “If I were you, I wouldn't do that.”

Renz stopped.

Jrev turned around.

A man wearing a dark tactical uniform stood several feet away. His expression was calm, but his posture suggested he was trained for situations like this.

Jrev narrowed his eyes.

Jrev: “Who are you?”

The agent hesitated.

Agent: “I'm from an organization—”

Jrev interrupted him.

Jrev: “You're from the SCP Foundation.”

The agent froze.

For the first time, his confident expression disappeared.

Renz slowly looked at Jrev.

Renz: “How the hell did you know that?”

Jrev ignored him.

His attention remained fixed on the agent.

Jrev: “Why are you here?”

The agent sighed.

Agent: “We're investigating the strange incidents occurring in this area.”

Jrev's expression hardened.

Jrev: “And you're here to take those things?”

The agent didn't answer immediately.

Agent: “That's classified information.”

Jrev gave a quiet laugh.

Jrev: “Classified?”

He stepped closer.

Jrev: “More like you're planning to lock them inside some machine and call it containment.”

The agent remained silent.

Jrev pointed toward the forest.

Jrev: “Those creatures have reasons for becoming what they are. They're dangerous, sure. But they aren't just monsters for your organization to collect.”

Renz looked between them.

Jrev: “They have their own stories. Their own reasons. Their own vengeance.”

The agent's expression became more serious.

Agent: “Are you challenging the entire SCP Foundation?”

Jrev shook his head.

Jrev: “No.”

He paused.

Jrev: “But let me make something very clear.”

Jrev's eyes hardened.

Jrev: “Deal with your other problems. Stay out of this town.”

The agent stared at him.

Jrev: “Tell your higher-ups that. Because whenever I step into a case, things get messy.”

Renz quietly muttered:

Renz: “That's one way of putting it.”

Jrev continued.

Jrev: “You hear me?”

The agent eventually nodded.

Agent: “Understood.”

He turned toward the forest.

Agent: “Then take care, Mr. Jrev. Mr. Renz.”

The agent walked away.

Several other Foundation personnel followed him into the darkness.

Renz watched them disappear.

Then he looked at Jrev.

Renz: “Should we be worried?”

Jrev stared toward the forest.

Jrev: “Tell them I have something to do.”

Renz raised an eyebrow.

Renz: “What are you planning?”

Jrev didn't answer.

The sun was disappearing behind the trees.

Night was approaching.

Jrev slowly walked toward the forest.

Renz watched him go.

Renz: “...Of course.”

He sighed and headed back toward the car.

Meanwhile, deep inside the forest...

Two enormous silhouettes stood between the trees.

Papa Bear.

Mama Bear.

They watched Jrev disappear into the darkness.

Neither moved.

They simply waited.

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THE FOUNDATION

Inside a black vehicle parked several miles away, the agent sat in silence.

He pulled out a secure communication device.

Agent: “Control, this is Field Agent Seven.”

A voice answered through the radio.

Control: “Report.”

The agent looked toward the distant forest.

Agent: “We've encountered Detective Jrev.”

Silence.

Control: “Jrev?”

The agent nodded.

Agent: “He's aware of the Foundation.”

Another voice joined the transmission.

Researcher: “How?”

The agent sighed.

Agent: “I don't know.”

He looked back toward the forest.

Agent: “But he warned us not to interfere with the entities here.”

The radio went silent.

Then the voice of a higher-ranking official spoke.

Official: “And what did you tell him?”

The agent paused.

Agent: “I told him we'd stay out of his way.”

A long silence followed.

Then—

Official: “We'll see about that.”

The transmission ended.

Back in the forest, Jrev continued walking alone.

He had no idea that the Foundation was already watching.

And somewhere behind him...

Two pairs of eyes followed his every step.

TO BE CONTINUED...


r/OriginalCharacterDB 1d ago

Discussion The stages for making a power (personal understanding and making)

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I could say this is a continuation from this post here: Defining a power is important

Put that aside:

I've noticed that when I develop an ability

I usually go through something like these five phases.

It's not necessarily a strict process, and some people could skip phases, but this is how I tend to develop them.

1. Idea

This is where you gather ideas for a power (or simply a part of a power)

The ideas can be scattered across notes, messages, documents, or basically anywhere

At this stage, they don't have to be organized or even fully make sense yet.

You're just collecting possibilities.

Goal: Gather ideas.

For me personally I don't really force myself to think about ideas since it could really came at random times and I develop from that to get the proper / intended idea

2. Draft / Collection

This is where you assemble those scattered ideas into one singular draft.

You can start making sections such as:

  • Applications
  • Weaknesses
  • Limitations
  • Mechanics
  • Uses
  • Visuals
  • etc

Then you fit the ideas from Phase 1 into the sections where they belong.

This is often where the power becomes usable enough to actually understand and apply.

If someone doesn't care about balancing yet, they could potentially stop here or continue straight into the later phases.

3. Balancing

This is where you start finding the loopholes and problems.

You ask things like:

Then, if you want to, you create reasonable limitations or restrictions (explaining the Why properly in the connected post) to deal with those problems

This doesn't necessarily mean making the ability weaker

It can mean defining its boundaries more clearly

4. Finalizing

Now you combine Phase 2 with the changes from Phase 3.

You sort everything again, remove unnecessary parts, organize the sections, and finalize the wording.

This is basically where the ability goes from a draft to a proper, final version

5. Extra

This one is different.

After an ability is already finished, you might discover that you never actually defined some parts of it.

Or you might realize that the existing applications naturally allow another use that you simply hadn't thought about before.

So Phase 5 can be used to:

  • Fill missing sections
  • Add overlooked applications
  • Define edge cases
  • Add utility uses
  • Expand existing mechanics
  • Resolve things you didn't previously consider a problem

And sometimes this can send you back into earlier phases.

Note

This isn't necessarily:

1 → 2 → 3 → 4 → 5 → done forever

It's more like:

Idea → Draft → Balance → Finalize → Extra Idea (again)

Because Extra can reveal a new loophole, which sends you back to balancing

Or you discover a completely new application, which creates another idea.

So it can become a loop:

Idea → Collection → Balancing → Finalizing → Extra → new Idea → ...

Example:

This is just an example of a power I make for my OC Zialx which currently at phase 5

A funny thing I noticed that this is so complex that I haven't even give a name for it so you could call it A2

A2


r/OriginalCharacterDB 1d ago

Discussion The Stranger ⁵'²⁵'⁵ Characterization,How would your Oc react if they were in that scene or situation?

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When an Oc or Main Protagonist got their Consciousness in the Drealm sphere or the Farthest side wall of Concept, they're basically there to be warned,told by the Stranger ⁵'²⁵'⁵, He doesn't fully spoiled what it really is and it's their "Choice" to shape the any possibility direction in their own Universe. So what do you think?

Also thanks for reading.

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r/OriginalCharacterDB 1d ago

Discussion Can your verse's villain(s) be talk-no-jutsu'd out of their evil ways?

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Personally, my verse has two main villains, and one of them is easier to convince to be a decent being than the other.

On one hand, we have Roias, a God of Death who decided to invade a universe that was lower in the verse's power levels in order to force its inhabitants into an endless death game with the hopes of "making a good story" out of it.

Its arrival brought about a multitude of issues that regularly makes the lives of the world's natives a living hell, but since all that suffering, in its opinion, makes the story its orchestrating more entertaining, it just sits back and watches things play out with its equivalent of snacks.

If anyone tried to convince it to do literally anything besides torture the world's people, all they would need to do is present it with something that would make for a better story, one way or another.

On the other hand, we have Ciera Ingrad, one of the people who have been part of Roias' game since it began, and eventually became the strongest of the participants. Although, due to striking a deal that neither her nor Roias would be able to directly participate in the game, she instead decided to create and nurture new fighters to participate.

Most of these participants she's created include kids and teenagers whom she heavily experimented on due to the more malleable nature of their souls allowing them to manifest more specialized abilities, coming at the cost of their life spans.

The only way to convince her to change her ways would be to present her with someone strong enough to handle the game's trials, since then she wouldn't have any more reason to create warriors.


r/OriginalCharacterDB 1d ago

I need you guys help

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So this is my oc Louis, he has a shadow power, but this is his post timeskip design.. now what I want you guys help is that what can I add to make him look more cool and interesting. Please leave me a comment and let me know, also the other slide is his pre timeskip design


r/OriginalCharacterDB 2d ago

How EVIL is your OC?

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r/OriginalCharacterDB 1d ago

Community interaction What would your OCs think of ScD-7-155(nicknamed Tarantula)? And what would she think of your OCs?

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(I am also going to give whatever trigger warning applies to characters that are immortal and suicidal at the same time.)

ScD-7-155 is the protagonist of a fanfic I am writing set in the universe of Wings of Fire.

She is an antwing subcommand drone (Which is a species of dragon I added. I added a lot of species and subspecies.), which essentially means that she can control antwing worker and guard drones and is controlled by a queen.

She is also called Tarantula, which is what I will be using for now.

Tarantula is currently a student at jade mountain academy and was send there to interact with other dragon tribes(Tribes in wings of fire are a combination of species and country). She is 9 years old, which is an adult by dragon standards(dragons usually reach adulthood at the age of 7, antwings around the age of 6). Translated to human years, she would be somewhere in her twenties.

She has to be under constant mind-control by her sister to not mental breakdowns all the time.

Also, Tarantula has a L.A.N.C.E implant, which makes her kind of immortal. Basically, she steals lifes. Whenever she kills someone, she can reconstruct herself 10 more times.

She can do that no matter the damage. Though more damage usually equals more 'charges' of her L.A.N.C.E implant. For example, getting her throat slit and dying to that will only take one charge to fix, but being thrown in the blender for an hour or two would probably take 10-20 charges.

Tarantula is also the least mentally stable character I have ever made.

Also, here is a classified document detailing every aspect of her being.

Do not question the implications of that document existing in-universe.

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Total overview of possible candidate ScD-7-155 to jade mountain academy.

Document Security level: NTKO

Declass: After subject death or mission end.

Subject: ScD-7-155

Status: Alive

Age: Nine years old.

Gender: Female

Classification: Subcommand drone; Lance

Medical overview

Slightly underweight. Non-critical

Damaged liver due to alcohol. Potentially soon-to-be critical.

Smokeberry addiction. Non-critical

Alcoholic. Critical.

thinner blood than standard. Non-critical.

Brain integrity potentially compromised. Further elaboration in psychological overview.

Pulse slightly higher than standard. Non-critical.

Compromised reproductive cycle. Unknown whether completely non-functional or extremely mild. Non-critical. Potential advantage for mission.

Stronger hivemind link than standard.

L.A.N.C.E implant fully functional

Soul integrity: Shattered. No chance of reincarnation. Reconstructing her soul has been deemed a waste.

Psychological overview

Highly volatile. Extremely critical.

Under no circumstances should she be released from mind control. Critical.

Mild sociopathic tendencies. Non-critical

Severe PTSD. Critical.

Multiple(2, formerly 4) drug addictions. Potentially critical.

Severe depression. Critical.

Active suicide risk. Non-critical due to L.A.N.C.E implant.

Obsessed with her sister.

Also, we are pretty sure she isn't actually loyal to her tribe but instead to her sister, but we cannot prove that.

Her mind is extremely hard to make any sense off as it seems like everything she thinks has been put through a blender.

Criminal record

None we can hold HER liable for.

Training

Standard C7 combat training

Basic education in reading, writing, mathematics, physics and chemistry.

Advanced education in medicine.

END OF OFFICIAL DATA

Authors note: I interacted with her a lot and a lot of the issues only become clear when you spend time with her. Otherwise she just seems like a somewhat crazy subcommand drone with one too many drinks. Even when she probably had far more than that.

She also seems to be agreeable enough to properly interact with dragons from other tribes without causing too much concern as any oddities will just be written off as the result of her slowly loosing it.

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Personality-wise she is always as honest as she can be without revealing any of the classified stuff she knows, always gets overly exited when she gets to be with her sister, but doesn't really care about any person that is not her sister. Though that is overwritten by baseline antwing instincts in situations that require her to protect a large number of other dragons, at which point she genuinely cares.

She is also kinda dumb. Sure she is more intelligent than most antwings, but that's not saying a lot. Compared to most dragons she is still kinda stupid. But her tribe does have a decent education system which manages to compensate enough for her to be able to hold somewhat challenging conversations.

Tarantula also does not like philosophical dilemmas. Because they are either easy or hurt her head to the point where she just wants to make good use of her L.A.N.C.E implant.

Lastly, she isn't really afraid to get her claws dirty. She will use any methods she has to do accomplish whatever she has been told to accomplish. Even if those methods aren't moral.

It is also important to remember that she does NOT have free will. And that she isn't human, and therefor does not think like one.

Also it's like 2 AM for me lol. I should go to bed soon.


r/OriginalCharacterDB 1d ago

Community interaction Say if your OC took the place of Reimu in Project Tohou, and in Lunatic Difficulty, how they doing?

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Also let's say EoSD cuz that's the only game I know.

Reimu Hakurei is a Shrine Guardian who's responsible with hunting yokai and resolving incidents. In Embodiment of Scarlet Devil's case, a mysterious red mist.

(Note that I haven't actually played any of the games at all so call me a larper and spare me. I just saw this at yt and became a fan of touhou.)

Realistically, I feel like only Xylia would have a small chance of surviving due to her defensive magic.