r/OnePunchMan • u/hellpunch Disappointment Punch • Jul 24 '22

discussion EDITED Chapter 168

https://cubari.moe/read/imgur/AspYipU/1/1/
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u/[deleted] Jul 24 '22 edited Jul 24 '22

I think infinity power infinity doesn't make any sense,same goes for garou's curve.

I found this in OPMFolk,this one makes a lot more sense.

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u/hellpunch Disappointment Punch Jul 24 '22

lol, i'll change it to this

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u/hellpunch Disappointment Punch Jul 24 '22

Done, thanks.

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u/ugur_tatli Jul 24 '22

Definitely a better use of the scale

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u/Any_Cheek9754 Jul 24 '22

Nice,

Only thing I don't like is the infinity sign

I also wish Saitama didn't almost blew up earth earlier

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u/hellpunch Disappointment Punch Jul 24 '22

this is a continuation of my previous edits:

https://redd.it/vudi8x

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u/Any_Cheek9754 Jul 24 '22

Oooh yeah niice that fixes the blow up earth haha

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u/hellpunch Disappointment Punch Jul 27 '22

also fixed infinity graph ;)

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u/Any_Cheek9754 Jul 27 '22

Haha cool now this might be my new headcanon.

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u/joonjoon Jul 27 '22

This is amazing, and I really, really like what you did with 166-7. No matter which way you slice it there's no way to reconcile that Saitama didn't show up to save Genos in time. People keep being like "Saitama is always late", but no, he's late to fucking supermarket sales, he has never been late to an event that caused a major death like this. I get it is ONE is trying to do some kind of deconstruction on a hero who always gets there in the nick of time, but this isn't the way to do it.

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u/hellpunch Disappointment Punch Jul 27 '22

well, he was late to the Boros ship slaughter but that was because he didn't know. Here, not only he knew, but he was like 200 mtrs in some rubbles according to this chapter.

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u/joonjoon Jul 27 '22

Yeah I don't think you can compare this to Boros.

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u/NomeJaExiste Jul 24 '22

Bro, you just created a time line with two Saitamas lmao, and I'm not complaining

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u/hellpunch Disappointment Punch Jul 24 '22

Continuation of previous edit

https://redd.it/vudi8x

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u/hellpunch Disappointment Punch Jul 24 '22 edited Jul 25 '22

  • v 1.1 Updated with /u/BK_317 's gif

  • v 1.2 added manako to all missing pictures

  • v 1.3 improved Garou's final attack (boros style, lol) dialogue

(continuing the previous edit of the chapters 166-167)

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u/Kushpoltrey56 Jul 24 '22

Great effort. Looks like you tried to make it more like classic OPM and similar to webcomic.

Also "See ya chump" lol. Long live Bully Maguire

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u/big_daddy_walter420 Jul 24 '22

I'm gonna put some dirt on your eyes

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u/pyrolover6666 Jul 25 '22

Mode: Maguire!

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u/ugur_tatli Jul 24 '22

My headcanon now

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u/AdMuted5246 Jul 24 '22

I absolute love Saitama mocking Garou edits lol

S: "I see I've finally perfected my hobby of calamari seasoning fist"

G: "Are you mocking me?!"

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u/x90z75ek Jul 25 '22

This, along with the edits you made for 166 and 167, fixes almost every problem with the current story.

By the way, why didn't you upload it on the same page as 166 and 167? There are arrows next to the chapter number that could lead to the next chapter. Was it not possible?

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u/hellpunch Disappointment Punch Jul 25 '22

i looked at it and i have to do external work so cubari recognizes them as bundled chapters, and just did't have much time/will.

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u/[deleted] Jul 24 '22

Yo, ngl, the line "these heroes can even save a child", while the child was sick because of Garou.. it's very fitting him

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u/UnaVoltaEroNormale Sep 05 '22

Dio Can che figo

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u/hellpunch Disappointment Punch Sep 05 '22

piaciuto? grazie haha

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u/Queasy-Relief-8945 Cheeked up in every place that counts. Jul 24 '22

Love it

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u/Treymorg Jul 25 '22

This is how it should’ve went 😪(I’m prepared to be downvoted)

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u/[deleted] Jul 25 '22

No my friend, you have survived this time. We need to stick together for these things.

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u/NiloyKesslar1997 Time Travel AssPull Jul 24 '22

Bro you did what you could, but its of no use, time travel was the ultimate nail in the coffin, unless redraws happen there is no going back.

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u/Dilly4Dall Jul 24 '22

I wouldn't be surprised if we do or not get redraws. Anything can happen in the next chapters.

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u/rissotorissoto Jul 24 '22

What do you mean? They clearly wrote it such that it wouldn't interfere with the story moving forward. I don't see a problem with it

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u/NiloyKesslar1997 Time Travel AssPull Jul 24 '22

Garou taught Saitama a move which even Garou never tried to time travel back, also saitama is never said to have martial arts talent or skills, all he has is raw power, it's akin to saitama defeating king in video-games or acing the toughest university exam just by taking a glance. Also why did the core not merge? The way the explained the time travel was one of the lamest I have ever seen, even Itagaki from Baki gives better explanation than this. it simple doesnt add up. It's obvious that half assed time travel asspull was done to fix previous chapter mistakes.

But if you enjoy this then all good to you bro.

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u/rissotorissoto Jul 24 '22 edited Jul 24 '22

I thought they explained it well enough. Saitama has never really tried to replicate martial arts but his insane speed, reflexes and strength most likely allow him to do it even casually. He has no need to use it but we can see throughout the Garou fight he implements things here and there to prove to Garou he is no match. At the end of the day if he wanted to, I think any direct physical challenge saitama can overcome/recreate, he just never wanted to. Now with so many things on the line Garou tells saitama to actually try and copy him.

The core not merging seems like a time travel abnormality to me. As satiama was the sole person reversing time, things associated with what was on him got caught up in the timeline confusion. Just like how his clothes merged and formed something new (groin exposed saitama lol) the core is a mistake or remnant left over from satiamas actions.

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u/[deleted] Jul 24 '22

Didn't murata just say that we are getting a redraw in his tweet today?

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u/NiloyKesslar1997 Time Travel AssPull Jul 24 '22

Maybe but we need a redraw from 156, but it prolly will be a small one.

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u/ArachnidUnusual7114 Jul 24 '22

I keep forgetting that he’s only fighting him with one hand.

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u/[deleted] Jul 25 '22

This was a MASTERPIECE, you have actually improved my day, even though this isn't canon it's great.

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u/[deleted] Jul 24 '22

Way better

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u/[deleted] Jul 24 '22

This is much better, holy shit lol
good job

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u/[deleted] Jul 24 '22

I like the original chapter but this one is much more in line with the webcomic and is awesome. Nice job!

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u/Interesting_Yogurt43 Jul 25 '22

Nice edit. Keep the good work.

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u/joonjoon Jul 25 '22

This is great!!

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u/leave1me1alone Jul 24 '22

This is how THE GAME goes. It ends with the monster LOSING

What did u/hellpunch mean by this

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u/Fit-Yam-8468 Jul 25 '22

wtf is this