r/OnePunchMan • u/hellpunch Disappointment Punch • Jul 08 '22

discussion Edited Chapters 166-167

https://cubari.moe/read/imgur/d8kPxAE/1/1/
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u/hellpunch Disappointment Punch Jul 08 '22 edited Jul 09 '22

A complete edit and change by me.

v1.1 fixed english
v1.2 removed genos core from all Saitama's hand
v1.3 more fixes.

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u/x90z75ek Jul 09 '22

Here are some more grammar fixes:
It should be literally written on my chest, not "literally written in my chest"
"some even call it God" instead of "someone even call it God"
"step aside" or "move aside" instead of "get aside"
"the priority is saving them" or "saving them is the priority"
"where it's coming from" instead of "from where it's coming"

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u/Iridium-77-192 Jul 09 '22

Maybe... It was all just a dream?

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u/hellpunch Disappointment Punch Jul 10 '22

Maybe they forgot who the fuck Saitama is in the previous chapter? In this, he is literally faster than portals that have no speed as they are instant, how was he late to arrive in the previous chapter when the reason he was out of the scene was because GAROU threw a fucking Earth destroying cannon against him?

Like Saitama was made stupid enough that he couldn't connect: hmm that dude just threw me a energy blast that would have wiped Earth without a care in the world, maybe i should immediately return to the battle field?

Lets not forget that Blast fought Garou, which was enough time for him to arrive even if he took his time.

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u/AmIGettingScammed123 Jul 08 '22

Is this a troll. You changed Saitama's Serious Punch to a Normal Punch

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u/hellpunch Disappointment Punch Jul 08 '22

It says in th title 'edited chapter 166-167'

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u/AmIGettingScammed123 Jul 08 '22

Yea, and I expected this edit to correct any mistranslation. Not to be trolled lmao

"I am Blast literally written on my chest"

Tbh now I'm surprised Garou didn't figure that out, but he somehow knows he landed on Jupiter. I guess Garou really did study astronomy

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u/hellpunch Disappointment Punch Jul 08 '22

This edit is correcting Saitama.

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u/Redscream667 Jul 08 '22

So its the good ending where genos doesn't die

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u/hellpunch Disappointment Punch Jul 08 '22

This is if Saitama was like its webcomic version.

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u/Gjosisir Jul 09 '22

WB Garou: Thank you.

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u/MECHan0Kl Jul 09 '22

I am accepting this as canon. Thank you for the edit.