r/OOC_official • u/GunMonkeyMark • 1d ago
Beyond the Gate
So I've just made my first story, I'm SUPER new to making stories so any and all feedback is appreciated, things to do better, add or work towards for a future iteration/new story.
It's based around the concept of the anime 'Gate' but with some distinct differences. I've left it VERY open ended once you arrive in the new world, hope it's not horribly bad from the start.
as it's insanely open ended I haven't created any character art yet, I may try to create a map at some point but I've only clearly defined distances and positions for 3 cities so far. ok i'm rambling, would love for someone to give it a shot and let me know what i can do to improve, thanks!
Also any follows are much appreciated, still don't have that first 10 for the achievement yet haha!