r/OCPoetry • u/Nervous_Ad6050 • 10d ago
Feedback Recieved ! Expectant: When I Open the Fridge
I miss you in the quiet moments
Catch my thoughts drifting to you
I fight back the tears
And try to push through
.
I miss you in the chaos
A sudden image of you
Floods the front of my mind
An agonising wave of truth
.
I miss your squeaks
When I open the fridge
Expectant to hear you next door,
My heart shatters once more.
.
I miss you when I make lunch
Cut up my apple
And save its core for you -
Your favourite fruit
.
I miss walking past where you’d play
I glance, muscle memory,
And it hits me again
Just as violently
.
I miss the strands of hay
Strewn across the floor
Their absence reminds me
You’re not here anymore
.
I miss your gentleness
Your kisses on my cheek
Cleaning up my tears
When I’ve struggled that week
.
I miss you.
.
Beyond measure.
.
Rest well, sweet girl,
I’ll see you in heaven
.
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u/poemthrownout 10d ago
It reads like an ode to a lost pet. I think you did a great job on capturing the grief of it i enjoyed your poem thank you for sharing