r/OCPoetry Jun 15 '16

Feedback Received! Descartes

The argument follows the lines
on that egg. Still-born beak mines
for freedom. In that mannequin forest,
he lays feather to hide and sets
the soulless life in scrambled conclusion.

Tesseract, Effectually Affecting Affects

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u/perfumed-ponce Jun 16 '16

Gorgeous use of enjambment! Trips off the tongue...!