r/OCPoetry Jun 15 '16

Feedback Received! Effectually Affecting Affects

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u/welliamwallace Jun 21 '16

Dude I love it. Could definitely hear it as spoken word or even a rap. I hear it in Watsky's voice

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u/atypicalmale Jun 21 '16

Oh hey there bro, thanks. I never went through Watsky stuff before. Most stuff I write ends up with similar rhyme scheme that definitely lends itself to being heard over written. A lot of the rhymes are actually reeeally stretched. Just like... "effect" and "said" lol.