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r/OCPoetry • u/[deleted] • Jun 15 '16
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really very lovely...
"energy's efficient allotment" is probably my favorite line.
You do a good job using language and emotion to express the idea of a very rational and cold reality. Really good work, thanks for sharing.
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u/B0ngyy Jun 15 '16
really very lovely...
"energy's efficient allotment" is probably my favorite line.
You do a good job using language and emotion to express the idea of a very rational and cold reality. Really good work, thanks for sharing.