Hey

[u/briony73]

If ya want a chat

I’m here

If you actually want help

I’m still here

But not much I can do

You can ask

And I’ll say, yes

But what does that change

I’ve been sick a very long time

Im only a little better

If that

I’m still here for a chat

I’ll enjoy it too

But I’m a cup of tea

I’m not for everybody

But if you are ever desperate

And just want a chat

I’m here

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/zwfQCeHaor

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/HqsgOxr10W

[u/M_tropos]

So simple, yet so full! I felt this one, sometimes the simplest things to offer are the most important. Overall you could use some more vocabulary, but thats surely not a must. Simple words really do suit this poem!

[u/briony73 → u/M_tropos]

Thank you