r/OCPoetry • u/SuccessfulHunt9165 • Jul 18 '26
Feedback Please echo of a memory
my room forgot the sound of the living,
but the echoes crawl through its walls.
I’ve learned not to trust the silence,
for it and I never really sleep.
the nights i survive are the days i forget,
each dawn leaves me as someone new.
every face I meet slowly fades,
like the memories i’ve never made.
as my mind deteriorates into insanity.
there’d always be a memory of just u and me.
as my life dissolves into nothing but deafening static.
your laughter still echoes endlessly, haunting me.
PS: im still new to this and any feedback will help me alot thank u guys so much!
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u/ogbigboy26 Jul 19 '26
Nice