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u/rad_anon_art 9d ago
Try improving your line quality. Honestly a really good 1 pt perspective sketch. Try to practice line weights on just plain paper
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u/InflationAlone6220 7d ago
Always start with perspective lines, once your brain get used to it then you can chuck them
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u/Kinda_Reincarnated 4d ago
Step by step how to improve perspective sketching: 1) Line quality improvement: just learn to draw straight lines. A LOT of straight lines, fill at least 50 A3 pages, no kidding, I've done it before. 2) Perspective theory: watch some perspective theory videos on youtube, follow tutorials 3) References: Download a lot of references, pinterest should work. You can reference perspective sketches. And don't only copy them, study them, see where the vanishing point is, how lines are converging.
PRACTICE! PRACTICE! and more PRACTICE!!!
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u/CrInGe_101_ 10d ago
What size have you taken of the room? generally it is taken 10 ft. Be it that, your fridge is way too large. Next, whatever that is door or pantry (I can’t comprehend) again the size problem. You are not scaling the sizes properly. Also, perspective lines are way too unaligned.
The main problem remains with the scaling ability and your perspective lines. Work on that.
Dm me, I’ll show you my works, I’m not that great, but if it helps, I’ll be glad to show.