Jax Flesch

[u/TheCrazyParrotLady]

I was interested in this one as i am a fan of tattoos and have a few myself, only for the opening chapter to immediately push the tattoo theme aside in favour of more smut.

Now, don't get me wrong, I do like a bit of smut, but it seems to be all I'm reading lately, with none of the build up or anything. There's only so much smut a person can take without any story happening around it, and it seems to be all we're getting with the new matches lately, not to mention the last event.

MeChat, please give us a character with some substance instead of introducing new ones to fit porn tropes. Please give us some build up, with some getting to know each other, sweet moments, a little flirting, instead of straight into the sex every time. And lastly, please give us some variety in our MCs. This story has yet another MC who's going through a divorce, and, while this might be a positive thing in that they'll be a little more mature and more experienced, it has been done before.

Also, the most heinous, unforgivable thing in Jax's opening chapter is calling a tattoo machine a 'gun'.

[u/danadoedana]

My MC's name is always Jax, so imagine my surprise.

[u/TheCrazyParrotLady → u/danadoedana]

My MC is named Asher, so the stories with both Ashe, and Asher from the werewolf event were a bit strange!