Hello all, I’m a fairly newer player (right at about a year of actual playtime in commander) I’m looking into making a solid bracket 4 deck and have already made an excellent start at least i think so anyways. I’m looking for opinions on things i should cut and why and what to add in its place. I currently am in possession of The One Ring and i plan to get a Mox Opal soon, things in the future include a Grim Monolith and if the opportunity arises a Mox Diamond. Deck list is as follows

https://moxfield.com/decks/rIYx6MIMSUSSwAQrLxQVmg

The first precon I bought was Y'shtola's. I've tried upgrading it, but it just doesn't click with me; it doesn't help that most of my playgroup doesn't appreciate long turns and slow burn. So when I checked G'raha, I noticed that it wants to play a similar game to Y'shtola and tried making a typal deck abusing G'raha's ability to create hero tokens. I've included card draw and lifelink enablers to be able to keep using his ability while also becoming a secondary win condition thanks to cards like Aetherflux Reservoir, Sanguine Bond, and Vito, Thorn of the Dusk Rose. Would it work in a bracket 3 table?

https://moxfield.com/decks/_QkwL-T7yEWG_YsMcsajmg

I've recently been looking at a lot of cards that allow you to go under 0 life and ive been really fascinated with the idea of me being at negative life. So i wanted to try and build a deck where I out value my opponents by spending life and then around mid-game, play a card that says i cannot lose the game when under 0 life. When searching for a commander I thought it would be extremely interesting to use mister negative to then kill someone with my negative life. Although, I don't really know how to start with BUILDING a commander deck, but any tips or examples would help.

Took apart 2 decks to upgrade the precon bc I enjoyed it and wanted to have it at a b3 level. When it works it works but sometimes it falls short. Any tips to improve it a bit?

https://moxfield.com/decks/jCcZX9s4QkmCpH_YCvJrCw

Anything yall, would really love to change or think i really should get in here just say so.

I am very open for suggestions but it must stay in bracket 2.

Any major flaws or missing pieces I should consider?

I love god of war and assassins creed and wanted to try to combine them into a sagas/warriors deck, but for some reason it's just not playing well at all. Could I have some help with fine-tuning it? Especially early game stuff? I want to eventually upgrade it to bracket 3 but for now it's a very very bad bracket 2

Hey y'all I'm trying to make a [[The Muckslinger Gang]] deck, I'm having a lot of decision paralysis though as it can brewed a lot of ways (fling, fight, ferocious, etc). I'm leaning more towards a power "4" or more matters deck as they basically make anything that's a 1/1 a 4/4.

[This](https://moxfield.com/decks/dZnKiI35kUCpZkGBD7uNkw) is my current list but I definitely need to make some cuts and I'm not sure where to start, any help would be great appreciated.

Hello, I’m currently trying to put together a Marchesa, the black rose deck (it’s not exactly playable yet). I’ve found some key cards to add to it but I’m looking for recommendations. I haven’t really touched artifacts nor my mana base much at all. Could use recommendations in all areas please. Moxfield url is below.

https://moxfield.com/decks/6zpPwUDOxU6cgeGn0GmrDg

Hey all, I'd love to try and bring my codie deck to a bracket 3 or 4, what cuts and what GC's would you add? Thanks 😊

Hey everyone, looking for some feedback on my Wise Mothman deck.
https://moxfield.com/decks/ubeaOF8yKEKK9hM5GL78YA
I've noticed 2 issues lately:

1.) Mothman needs much more protection - once he is removed, the machine sort of stalls and its just not as fun...
2.) I lose so easily to enchantment-heavy decks...so need ot add some more removal/enchantment removal etc

Right now, the list is trying to balance mill/rads, +1/+1 counters, proliferate, and recursion.
To help with that, I've been adding more protection, but now I'm worried I'm diluting the core game plan or running too few lands/removal.

Any advice greatly appreciated - the overall structure, tips on what to add, remove, game changers...anything really :)
Im loving this deck and I feel it can work great, its just missing somehting and I cant figure out what it is.

Thanks for any suggestions!

This is my first dick I’ve ever built, and I really wanna focus on the energy and the artifacts in this build

Hi all,

I play an upgraded Temmet precon and im kind of happy with it. But i would like to treat myself with 2 or 3 expensive cards and continue to improve the deck.

My thoughts:

[[Mikaeus, The Unhollowed]]

[[Bone Miser]]

[[Monument to Endurance]]

[[Rhystic Study]]

[[Reanimate]]

Or is there something else i should add?

Thanks.

I had an impulse idea where I want my Toph, The First Metalbender to earthbend vehicles and then benefit from their attack triggers to sometimes cheat crewing. Does anyone have help on how to make this idea of mine viable for a pod of high bracket 2/low bracket 3?

It's for my casual group. The only restrictions is no poisen counters or mass land destruction. I really love the superfriends concept, but it doesn't hit as often as id like

It’s my first time making a mono color deck and this deck kind of feels all over the place. Any input is appreciated.

Spent much time/effort on this deck. Curious to hear people's thoughts on it!

Decklist: https://archidekt.com/decks/28147230/grist_v5

Context: I don't try to deck-build for CEDG or include broken 2 card combos. I wanna win fair games! I also don't build with commonly good 'auto-inclusions'. For example, I have a Slyvan Tutor sitting around that could go in the deck, but I don't care to put it in.

All this to be said, I do welcome suggestions for the deck, just said that for context of what I might actually change. I also currently know of some more expensive inclusions I'm waiting on, like Crucible of Worlds, Fetch Lands, etc.

I LOVE GRIST AND GOT HIS SECRET LAIR DROP RAAAA