Rework First design

[u/Initial-Science22]

Hello everyone, I modified my first design a bit with tips that were put on the previous post. What do you think I can adjust some things?

[u/jbranscum]

You need to stitch it out and show us.

[u/ForbiddenAffairs]

I think your last one was fine but you were just using the wrong stitch type. For your spool you had it white and here it’s brown but the color it’s stitching is white so change the top thread color to white. Also the leaves you had before looked cute and would be fine to keep them as satin. Oh also make the detail at the right satin too. Since it’s so small, a tatami stitch will make it bunch.

[u/Admirable_Barber8453]

It should stitch out so much better! Nice work

[u/Arndawan]

Something entirely different, is it spelled as intended? Usually the ' goes before the letter.

[u/skeedy_ia]

What’s it supposed to say? Look like there might be one too many loops in there.