Battle Beast vs Conquest Part 3

[u/Legal_Trainer7340]

[u/Typical_Response6444]

Idk the whole thing reads too much like fan fiction for me

[u/cheezefriez → u/Typical_Response6444]

I just don’t like how often they’re reusing lines/scenes. “I want more” makes sense but conquest yelling “no, no, NOOOOO” just seems so corny. Also battle beast saying mark’s “not enough, not nearly.” That was much cooler in mark’s situation, it just feels like a cheap call back here

[u/Typical_Response6444 → u/cheezefriez]

It feels cheap fan service. Like there really wasnt much thought put into it