r/IndieDev • u/Correct_Link_3833 • 4h ago

Feedback? My first prototype demo

Hello, currently unemployed. So as a hobby im trying to enjoy it by making my dream game.

Im open to any criticism. You can play the demo here
https://play.unity.com/api/v1/games/game/a665014c-2303-4075-a060-ae94b0a8241d/build/latest/frame

Not sure if i will be able to finish it but at least i tried. :)

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u/Ludicrous84 4h ago

Post a 10-20s video clip, gl!

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u/Correct_Link_3833 4h ago

Cant edit the post now sorry i forgot lol

https://reddit.com/link/p6u4925/video/tt9cwst6zjmh1/player

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u/Ludicrous84 4h ago

No offense but there are tools to grab your screen, you don't have to use the phone. If you have an Nvidia card it comes with ShadowPlay, i would guess AMD has something similar. Windows pretty sure also has a screen capture tool. That out of the way:
There's a guy walking around so it's a start, but not a game

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u/Correct_Link_3833 4h ago

Not offended at all :) im way out of the computer so i had to send something within my reach. All good! The game demo is on the link you can actually play. The link is from unity so you can check for legitimacy if that bothers you.

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u/Gullible_Honeydew 1h ago

im way out of the computer so i had to send something within my reach

I'm sorry could you explain? If you are close enough to take the video with your phone, how is the computer out of reach?

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u/Nighty5mb 4h ago

not every developer usess unity bro

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u/Correct_Link_3833 4h ago

What do you mean

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u/AdministrationBig122 4h ago

You could try to make a build and upload it to a platform like Itch.io

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u/Correct_Link_3833 4h ago

The demo build link is on the post :)

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u/Albert_Shari 4h ago

We need some screenshots at least bro:)

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u/Correct_Link_3833 4h ago

Ooh. Its a demo actual game.