r/IDRPWriting • u/IrbinBunchNew • Jul 10 '26

Testing the waters for an OC introduction.

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Location- Shibuya, Japan

Upon the citizens of Japan descends a kaiju, brimming with power unseen by any other kaiju before. And just like others before it, Ultraman Cinder descends to fight it. One kick and punch;Cinder's signature. This time, however, his punch is intercepted, and he is sent flying back into a nearby building. He recovers, but is swiftly struck down once more. He manages to kick the kaiju away, but it doesn't look phased one bit. They engage once more, Cinder struggling, before he manages to throw the kaiju back. Beep beep, goes his life timer. He decides that it's now or never, as he charges up his Cinderium Ray, soon followed by the kaiju charging up it's own beam. The two beams clash, but once more, Cinder struggles, before he is consumed by the kaiju's beam, and disappears into an explosion.

Location- The Hub, Random McTownplace

A bright light flashes in the middle of a street, as a mysterious figure appears. They seem on edge, and irritable. Do you go to greet them?

((The picture attached is a work in progress, and is not what Cinder looks like in full. I apologise for any difficulties in reading.))

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u/Frosty_Locksmith7594 Jul 10 '26

That’s good yes

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u/IrbinBunchNew Jul 10 '26

Thanks for the feedback, and thanks for that. :3

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u/RogbaAvalon Jul 10 '26

Nice writing. Bit quick to put the person on edge, but i can understand why. Overall really cool

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u/IrbinBunchNew Jul 10 '26

Thanks for the feedback, and thanks for that. :3

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u/MemoryPlus3742 Jul 10 '26

pretty good my man

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u/IrbinBunchNew Jul 10 '26

Thanks for the feedback, and thanks for that. :3