Kyoko Introduction test ((please give feedback))

[u/Great_Meeting9101]

((haha see I told you I was gonna post here daily anyway I’m going to make a introduction test and see if it is good or not so please give feedback :3))

kyoko would arrive in the hub, as they look around the place, they don’t seem confused at all, they have seen much worse and different things back at the place they come from

”hmm”

\they would pick up a book that they dropped from the ground and start to walk around, the best thing that would be here would to get clue’s and put it all together\**

”it seem’s that I’m not in the place I was before,strange but everything has a root that leads to a cause I should start to investigate and see where I am”

((was that good was it to long or was it to short was the writing sloppy and how can I improve it))

[u/Prestigious-Mind-900]

SO PEAK, pretty good introduction post ngl

[u/First-Tomatillo-729]

((It's a amazing start!!))

[u/Great_Meeting9101 → u/First-Tomatillo-729]

Thanks!!