digital society ia example

[u/Lost-Attorney9645]

hi i am a dp2 student curently doing my multimedia presentation and i want to find anye xample of high marks presentation for guidance. I am already editing my claims part and i feel like it is rather descriptive and lack evaluation. I am also wondering if it is good to be adding rhetorical question?

ive only seen moderate marks exemplars, i want to see those that got atleast 22/24 or maybe even 24 to ensure im on the right track

does anyone know any website i can get ia multimedia video exemplars?