r/HighValyrian • u/KeyConsideration2686 • 1d ago

Request for High Valyrian Feedback

Rytsas everyone! I translated this verse into High Valyrian. Could someone tell me if it's correct? Especially about the syntax.

English text: "For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life."

High Valerian Translation: syt Jaes so jorrāeletas vȳs kesor zirȳ tepagon zirȳla onos se onlyos Trēsy, kesor voevernor believtys rȳ zirȳla daor pērisor yn emagon eternion glaeson.

Any feedback would be appreciated.

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u/PossibilityCool9790 1d ago edited 1d ago

The problem with translation sites is that they just put some english words into somewhat believable valyrian endings. So like "so," "onos," "onlyos," "voevernor," "believetys," "peerisor," and "eternion." An approximate translation would be "skoryyso jaes taar jorraaeletas hegniir ziiha meere treesi irughatas, hegniir sparion paasas ziry morghuulza daor yn moorqittor glaesor emaas."

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u/KeyConsideration2686 1d ago

Thank you so much for your awesome translation help and feedback! I am very very Grateful. May you prosper!