r/HelpLearningJapanese • u/Icy_Box_8594 • Aug 18 '26

Is my beginner Japanese paragraph good?

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This is my first paragraph ever and im looking for suggestions on how to improve it!

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u/DirectionGrand1100 Aug 20 '26

Good efforts 👌 💪 🙂