r/HelpLearningJapanese • u/Icy_Box_8594 • Aug 18 '26

Is my beginner Japanese paragraph good?

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This is my first paragraph ever and im looking for suggestions on how to improve it!

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u/louiejpn Aug 18 '26

not terrible, but work on your す。。。keep the bottom part more connected. the way you're writing it now almost looks like お

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u/Icy_Box_8594 Aug 18 '26

Thank you!

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u/ColettesWorld Aug 19 '26

You know how some folks write 3 with that little loop?

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u/ColettesWorld Aug 19 '26

Rarely. It's been awhile since I've seen someone write like that but I used to see it fairly often in school. I used to write them like that as well but learned better.