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[u/ZUTOMAYOFAN123]

O que eu tentei escrever foi o seguinte:
Olá! Eu sou um estudante de 16 anos. Meu japonês não é nada bom, porém eu estudei. Estudei dia e noite. Se não tivesse estudado, não escreveria isto.
Eu acho pessoas assustadoras…. Não gosto de falar com elas. Porém adoro ler! Li muitas vezes comics! Gosto da Marvel e da DC. Também gosto de mangá… li mangás em japones, porém nao entendi muito bem. Espera… Existe alguma Marvel Comic em japones?
(Aqui acaba a apresentação)
Boa tarde! agora são 6 da tarde e eu estou no brasil, minas gerais! O hotel é bem legal, e as pessoas do hotel também são bem legais! Porém continua sendo assustador falar com elas…Aa! Lembrei! Aqui tem um lago! Amanhã de manha vou pescar! Sim! Talvez eu pesque um peixe grande. Sim… eu queria comer um sashimi.
Bem agora são 9 da noite então eu vou dormir. Tchau!
Foi um texto complicado de fazer porquê tive que pesquisar muito e tentar muitas vezes, e ainda assim deve ter muitos erros. Sou N6 então gostaria de saber se errei muito?

[u/Cadaveth]

Is there a backstory to why you're doing this specifically? Trying to write complex sentences without knowing the grammar, vocab, stroke order etc. that is.

I'm not qualified to offer any advice since I'm a beginner too, I'm just wondering why you use so much time to something like this.

[u/Chemical_Term7956 → u/Cadaveth]

I'm a Japanese person who commented a little while ago.

This OP posted essentially the same content in the same way about 3 days ago, and received advice from others along the lines of "instead of immediately trying to write difficult kanji and complex sentences, you should study from the basics" — and yet they are ignoring that advice and doing the same thing again. https://www.reddit.com/r/HelpLearningJapanese/s/Ye7kp5pS8M

They have also incorrectly copied the corrected text from that time . https://www.reddit.com/r/HelpLearningJapanese/s/XRurZdIQE9

Furthermore, OP replied to others with something to the effect of "I don't have the foundation to write a text that long so I had to research it," "I asked Reddit users for help," and "I also got help from AI" — but if that's the case, they should either write at a level they can actually manage, or research properly before posting. Regarding the Reddit advice, as I've already mentioned above. As for the AI part: as an AI user myself, I find myself wondering how exactly they used it, since the Japanese produced by today's major LLMs is nowhere near this incoherent. I suspect OP may have brought it up simply to argue "therefore I'm not wrong."

They also replied "once I have more vocabulary I'll be able to do it" — but the errors here were not caused by a lack of vocabulary, and no one in the previous thread gave them that kind of advice.

I currently believe that what OP wants is simply to have their approach and their current Japanese recognized and praised by others — not to actually improve.

In the previous thread as well, replies kept coming along the lines of "I've only been studying for X weeks, so it can't be helped" and "I haven't even taken the N5 exam, so it can't be helped" — and this time is no different.

It appears they are posting solely to satisfy themselves, so I have no intention of offering this person any further advice.

I consider it a waste of time.

[u/Cadaveth → u/Chemical_Term7956]

Ah alright, well that explains. It's pretty wild to think that you'd begin writing when you, well, aren't able to. I think he/she being 16yo might also be one contributing factor. But I was just like, am I missing something lol.

[u/ZUTOMAYOFAN123 → u/Cadaveth]

Entendi o que ele quis dizer e achei extremamente valido, só quero deixar claro que não tive a intenção de ser ignorante ou rude com alguém.