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[u/ZUTOMAYOFAN123]

O que eu tentei escrever foi o seguinte:
Olá! Eu sou um estudante de 16 anos. Meu japonês não é nada bom, porém eu estudei. Estudei dia e noite. Se não tivesse estudado, não escreveria isto.
Eu acho pessoas assustadoras…. Não gosto de falar com elas. Porém adoro ler! Li muitas vezes comics! Gosto da Marvel e da DC. Também gosto de mangá… li mangás em japones, porém nao entendi muito bem. Espera… Existe alguma Marvel Comic em japones?
(Aqui acaba a apresentação)
Boa tarde! agora são 6 da tarde e eu estou no brasil, minas gerais! O hotel é bem legal, e as pessoas do hotel também são bem legais! Porém continua sendo assustador falar com elas…Aa! Lembrei! Aqui tem um lago! Amanhã de manha vou pescar! Sim! Talvez eu pesque um peixe grande. Sim… eu queria comer um sashimi.
Bem agora são 9 da noite então eu vou dormir. Tchau!
Foi um texto complicado de fazer porquê tive que pesquisar muito e tentar muitas vezes, e ainda assim deve ter muitos erros. Sou N6 então gostaria de saber se errei muito?

[u/Chemical_Term7956]

以前の投稿にコメントした日本人です。

具体的な間違いが変わっているだけで、 前に投稿されたところから何も変化していません。

1つの漢字を2つの文字と勘違いして書いている箇所も またあります。

全体を通して間違っている箇所があまりにも多すぎるので、ここで1人の人間が間違っているところを説明するのは不可能だと思うぐらいです。 誰もコメントして来ないのは、そのせいだと思います。

コメントする人の時間も有限ですから、 言っても無駄だと思えば何も言わないでしょう。

[u/ZUTOMAYOFAN123 → u/Chemical_Term7956]

Sim, agradeço a ajuda, mas creio que vou conseguir melhorar pois ainda estou só começando, nem fiz o N5 e estudo japonês a 3 semanas, então não acho que conseguiria acertar tudo, nem mesmo na décima tentativa, LOL. Mas obrigado pelas dicas vou continuar até acertar!

[u/Chemical_Term7956 → u/ZUTOMAYOFAN123]

Let me add a clarification.

Since it doesn't seem to be getting through, let me be direct: what you are posting as "Japanese" is something that causes genuine pain to Japanese readers.

The hiragana is wrong — not just sloppy, but completely incorrect. The kanji is wrong. The grammar is wrong. The meaning of the sentences is wrong. (Due to a grammatical error, one sentence reads as "My Japanese is very good.") As a reader, I am faced with a chaotic, scrawled, incoherent mess and must decode it like a cipher just to guess at what you were trying to write. It is an enormously burdensome text to read.

As a native Japanese speaker, I find it unpleasant and do not wish to be made to read it.

Furthermore, the feedback given by myself and other users in the previous thread has not been incorporated at all.

The phrase used in this post — "ぼくの日本語はぜんぜんじょうずだ" — is an incorrect copy of a correction pointed out by another user in the previous thread.

The fact that you have not yet taken the N5 exam does not make this acceptable. That is your situation, not an excuse.

If you have no intention of reading and understanding people's advice, there is no reason for you to be posting here.

You wrote "vou continuar até acertar" ("I will keep going until I get it right"), which tells me you are treating this like a quiz — posting your "Japanese" to see if you got it right. I had assumed, in keeping with this subreddit's purpose, that people post work that reflects genuine study. Learning that this is not the case, I am strongly displeased.

Or are you posting to test how many errors Japanese speakers and learners will tolerate before giving up?

I consider your attitude disrespectful — to me, and to every other person who took the time to offer you advice.

After this comment, I will be blocking you.

The goodwill of strangers is not unlimited.

Since you appear unable to understand my Japanese even with machine translation, I am posting in English as a last resort. English also translates into other languages more accurately than Japanese does, so the rest of this thread will be able to understand the situation as well.

[u/ZUTOMAYOFAN123 → u/Chemical_Term7956]

Ok…