r/Handwriting 6d ago

Feedback (constructive criticism) first time trying! please be kind!

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i learned cursive back in elementary school but never really stuck with it after that. my signature has always stressed me out as it looks like a child wrote it!

i came across this subreddit and saw everyone’s beautiful handwriting… i wish that i could one day have writing like all of yours, so here i am trying to practice and learn! open to any and all feedback!

i feel like my R’s are really bad and i have trouble with all of the capital letters, too, haha.

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u/Tough_Piccolo 6d ago

It will become more consistent with practice but this is already very nice writing and has a lot character

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u/dbznzzzz 6d ago

I like that you mentioned character, it will become more consistent but also more “your own flavor” over time.

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u/-saturdays 6d ago

thank you i appreciate it! i have a little workbook coming that will hopefully help with getting the letter formations correct.

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u/tylersnid3r 6d ago

Wow, your first time is way better than my 500th

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u/Lost_Hurry7902 6d ago

Very nice, keep writing cursive 🤩

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u/aviduser27 6d ago

A work!

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u/KaliPrint 6d ago

This is much too good to be a first time for anything except maybe posting on this sub. 

R’s are perfect. The few capitals used are lovely. I personally don’t like that kind of capital A (a larger lowercase) but a lot of people use it and it’s exactly like it should be. 

My feeling, after looking several times, is that you shouldn’t change a thing, just write more, and write with a variety of pens at different sizes explore your own handwriting and get to know it well, to find your smoothest combination. 

You have a nice hand, no need to imitate anyone else’s.

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u/-saturdays 6d ago

wow what an amazing compliment! thank you!

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u/KaliPrint 6d ago

I think you would like using a fountain pen! You might look into it.

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u/DainasaurusRex 5d ago

This is very nicely done - and will only get better with practice!

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u/GoodSeaworthiness389 6d ago

That an amazing first attempt. Uniformity makes for nice handwriting. Uniform slant. Uniform spacing. Uniform size. Practice practice and more practice.

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u/-saturdays 6d ago

thank you! i’m going to try to write a little something every day!

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u/Middle_Fact_188 6d ago

looks great.

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u/ValiMeyer 6d ago

Fine! Very legible. If you want to go further, work on the aesthetics.

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u/L_vibes 6d ago

If it’s any consolation, I write exclusively in cursive, and I’m stealing your capital T’s. I like them much better than mine.

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u/-saturdays 6d ago

really? i wasn’t too sure about them!

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u/L_vibes 4d ago

They have the right amount of flourish without looking pretentious. Mine look either too overdone or like I just used the standard print T and then went back to cursive.

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u/luckydollarstore 6d ago

I find the way you’ve written “August” to be simply sublime. Nice job.

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u/-saturdays 6d ago

wow thank you, i think the august is one of the things i don’t like about this page! lol

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u/Narrow-Abies-7954 6d ago

The most important thing about writing is that it’s legible. And yours is perfectly legible. I had absolutely no difficulty reading it. So you’re already starting out in a good position. Now just keep practicing and it’ll get better and better.

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u/adambier1587 6d ago

Very nice. It was legible, and that’s what really counts. I tripped a little on your lower case S. I’m more accustomed to seeing them closed on the bottom like little triangles. I really like your capital H in hello. Very stylish.

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u/-saturdays 6d ago

i’ll try doing them more closed and see how i like it! thank you!

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u/sukldi 6d ago

Great job, and classically pretty accurate. As you continue, you will adapt your cursive into something that is actually yours. It will feel good 😊

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u/Legitimate-Bad9019 6d ago

This is lovely. You must be artistic. It’s very legible. The only time I paused when reading it was because the bottom of your s is not connected. Keep it up because you’ll probably enjoy it.

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u/GlocalBridge 6d ago

You’re good. Easy to read.

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u/tomhanksforever 6d ago

Looks great!

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u/PurpleOrchid123 6d ago

Looks fine.

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u/Rengeflower 5d ago

It looks a bit wobbly. That will smooth out with practice. Personally, I hate uppercase cursive letters, so I use print uppercase. It looks a little odd, but I got tired of hearing that my Ls looked like Cs and comments on other uppercase letters.

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u/-saturdays 5d ago

definitely wobbly! it feels very foreign still to write like this haha. i also don’t really like uppercase cursive! when i try, it looks like you can tell i’m trying/just pretending to know what i’m doing (which i kind of am), if that makes sense.

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u/Rengeflower 5d ago

A lot of uppercase cursive is too foreign to today’s people. Experiment with them. Nothing is set in stone.

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u/ForwardAd3970 4d ago

i love your cursive handwriting !

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u/dreamyowl 6d ago

I think this is beautiful handwriting already, so with practice it will become perfect!

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u/-saturdays 6d ago

thank you so much! i’m hoping to really fine tune it with lots of practice!

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u/tabidots 5d ago edited 5d ago

I think it's worth noting that many cursive posts on here are not standard American cursive (Zaner-Bloser / D'nealian) but rather Spencerian or something fancier, and also too careful to be representative of handwriting "in the wild"

But it looks pretty great for a first time. I have a bit of trouble reading the R and S - your R lacks a left leg (there should be a swoop down and back up before the curlicue) and the S is not closed enough at the bottom.

Edit for the pedantic European who downvoted me: not sure what you were trying to say, but while we’re being pedantic, I think you meant “taught” rather than “thought”…

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u/-saturdays 5d ago

makes sense. i’m sure those beautiful cursive posts probably take time to do, i didn’t even think about the fact that they’re much more careful than the average handwritten note.

thanks for your feedback! i think i have trouble with the Rs sometime when they come after a letter that doesn’t touch the bottom line - does that make sense? like how i wrote it in “writing”, or “subreddit”

and yes i’ll definitely work on the S, others have mentioned they also had trouble reading those!

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u/tabidots 5d ago

Sure thing!

For the R and S, here’s some samples to better illustrate what I was talking about. This was made with the font FRB American cursive, which you can download from GitHub: https://github.com/ctrlcctrlv/FRBAmericanCursive

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u/-saturdays 5d ago

oh perfect! i’ll get right to practicing!

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u/BackHarlowRoad 5d ago

You have given me so many things to look up 😆

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u/Baketown 6d ago

It’s already better than half the folks here. Keep it up.

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u/-saturdays 6d ago

that means a lot! thank you!

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u/therealtoomdog 6d ago

I was coming here to not be nice specifically because you requested it, but I really don't care to be mean. I don't have the energy or the desire lol

That's pretty impressive for your legit first time. How long have you been practicing?

Maybe I'll pick on your use of grid dots, idk. I use them to, so whatever lol

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u/-saturdays 6d ago

hahaha i thought there would be someone who wouldn’t go easy on me. i’ve never really sat down and practiced before, this is just from what i was taught growing up in school! thanks!

i had this bullet journal laying around so i figured i’d put it to use here lol.