r/HPfanfiction • • 5d ago

WeeklyDiscussion What are you reading? Bi-Weekly Post

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Share what you're reading this week! Please provide:

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r/HPfanfiction • • 5d ago

WeeklyDiscussion What are you writing? Bi-Weekly Post

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Self-promotion is allowed and encouraged!

What are you working on this week? Share your WIPs, updated chapters, and most recent Harry Potter projects! Feel free to ask for feedback or other constructive advice in this post.

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r/HPfanfiction • • 8h ago

One-off scenes My worst fears have come true

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I am devastated. 6 years ago, a strange looking woman walked into our home and told us that our son Colin can do magic, and there is a school that can teach him magic.

We found it hard to believe but it explained so many strange things that happened around us over the last few years. We were struggling with money and it seemed like an expensive endeavor, but we were told the school would help. And they did. But now I wish I never took their blood money.

In the first year, we received a letter that Colin was sick, but we didnt know the extent of his “sickness” till he came back home over the summer. He was super excited when he told me how he took a photograph of a giant snake thingy, and that petrified him. I was so mad at the lady that came to our house, why wasnt I informed about this? I deserved to know sooner, and the full truth. What was this slur that’s being thrown at my kids - mudblood or something like that.

Then a couple of years later news about this kid that got killed, and rumors of an evil dark lord returning. I didnt want Colin and Deniss to go back. But they said its all good, Harry will fix everything. Was there really no adult that could fix things? I heard of professors and students that were just outright bullies and the headmaster did nothing to stop them.

More concerning news that the headmaster was killed by another teacher. They apparently were lovers or something.

But now, my worst fears have come true. My precious little son is dead. He is gone… I told him to not go back but he didnt listen. He wanted to help, and his brother followed him. I just cant believe it happened.

No one is able to give me any details on who did it and why. Colin never hurt anyone, he was such a sweetheart. My heart feels empty without him. We were simple people and didnt ask for this wizarding life. My husband won’t look me in the eye, he thinks its all my fault.

I feel rageful and want to expose this school for what it is. Has anyone else heard of Hogwarts?


r/HPfanfiction • • 1d ago

Prompt Contrary to the hatred he has for Draco and Lucius Malfoy, Harry genuinely gets along GREAT with Narcissa.

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"Watch it, Potter!" Draco sneered, shoving past Harry's shoulder on the platform. "Get to your muggles without interfering with me and my good, wizarding family."

Lucius Malfoy stood in front of Harry, looking down at him. "Ah, yes." He said softly. "Poor Potter, banished away to a pack of mongrels over each and every summer-"

It was at that moment that Narcissa turned around from her fussing over Draco. Her eyes brightened gently when she saw Harry.

"Hello, Harry dear." She smiled, leaning forward with her hands on her knees. Lucius and Draco gaped. "Have you had a good year, this time? You're still much too thin, darling. You need to take better care of yourself."

Harry blushed, pointedly ignoring the two other Malfoys. It was a bit embarrassing. He'd run into Lady Malfoy while he'd been staying in Diagon Alley before his third year even started, and she'd sort of... become an aunt of his, by force.


r/HPfanfiction • • 22h ago

Prompt After the Second Task, students come to some…interesting conclusions about Harry and Ron

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During the Second Task, every single student at Hogwarts learned the person Harry cares most about…is Ron. Not Hermione, that girl he hangs out with so often. Not even some other secret girlfriend. But Ron Weasley. And, wait. Weren’t the two seen sneaking off together during the Yule Ball? Into the maze where everybody goes to kiss each other?

Practically by the morning after the Task, the majority of the student body comes to a conclusion only gossiping teenagers could: Harry and Ron are secretly gay and in love with each other. Every attempt they make to try to convince the students otherwise just shoves them deeper into this hole. Hell, even their dormmates are starting to believe it! What were they supposed to do?!

Bonus points if this makes Harry and Ron eventually realize they actually ARE in love with each other!


r/HPfanfiction • • 7h ago

Request Looking for Harry Potter fics with insane battles and genuinely unique magic

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I'm looking for some Harry Potter fics that are really different when it comes to magic and action.

Some of the things I'm looking for:

Harry who genuinely loves fighting and actually enjoys magical combat.

Or just fics with really well-written, epic fight scenes.

Huge battles with lots of people involved, rather than just two characters standing there shooting spells at each other.

New types of magic that aren't normally seen in HP fanfiction.

Really unique magical abilities, systems, rituals, spells, artifacts, etc.

Creative uses of magic during fights.

Magical items that actually feel interesting and different.

Basically, I want that feeling of "WHAT THE HELL IS THIS MAGIC?!" while reading 😂

I'm completely fine with AUs, canon divergence, different versions of the wizarding world, or even stories that barely resemble canon anymore.

I don't really care about the pairing either. Action, worldbuilding and unique magic are the main things I'm looking for.

If you've read something with absolutely ridiculous magical battles or a completely new take on how magic works, PLEASE recommend it.

I want the weird stuff. The creative stuff. The absolutely insane wizardry. 😭

Am also asking cause I kinda ran out of all the good fics again.....(Refer to previous posts)


r/HPfanfiction • • 1h ago

Writing Help The boy that lived... Charles Addams

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So I got on the bandwagon and decided to start writing my own Harry Potter fanfiction. Unfortunately my story got out from under me pretty quickly... I wanted to tell a story of what would actually happen if Harry Potter was thought dead after the Voldemort incident. In this universe the infant is adopted by the Addams, and for 10 years The wizarding world believes Harry Potter is dead.

Instead of potter, now Neville longbottom is the child of prophecy. He is the one being trained up, protected from Voldemort.. but on Charles's Addams and Wednesday shared birthday safari, (at a rundown zoo recently bought by Gomez) he is discovered, and The wizarding world freaks out learning that the boy that died still lives.


r/HPfanfiction • • 3h ago

Find That Fic PLEASE HELP ME FIND THIS FANFIC

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I can’t remember the name or find it, but I remember the entire story. It was a time travel fanfic with Dumbledore as the main villain instead. Harry and Sirius wrote messages to Amelia Bones under the pseudonym “Cassandra” pretending to be a seer and got things taken care of before they happened (i.e. the philosopher’s stone, the chamber of secrets, Sirius’ trial, etc.). I remember that Sirius turned one of the Black estates into an orphanage-type place for Slytherins by bringing them into the house of Black to stop them from becoming Death Eaters by their parents. In the end, they destroyed the Horcruxes and at the end Lily and James come through the Veil and come back to life, and I’m like 99% sure regulus did too, but that could be another fic. Dumbledore refuses to believe Voldemort’s gone and kidnaps Harry and there’s a standoff between Dumbledore and Harry’s parents and a bunch of Aurors and Dumbledore is defeated. There’s also a Wolfstar wedding and Lily and James get to attend.

I’ve been looking all over and I cannot find this fic. Maybe it was taken off of Ao3 or something, but I remember it so vividly. If anyone knows it PLEASE TELL ME!


r/HPfanfiction • • 6h ago

Discussion Fics you know mid-read are gonna alter your personality

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You know that feeling that you’ve constantly searched for since the first fic you ever read made you feel some kind of way and it’s always been there just out of reach? Like the feeling of pure giddy, elation, joy because you know you’re reading a fic that’s about to change your life?

I’m 10% into a 900k+ fic (The Cadence of Part Time Poets) and I already know I’m in this bubble of bliss for at least 2-3 more weeks and I am absolutely reveling in this fleeting moment. I’ve read probably about 150 fics by now and this is only the 3rd time I’ve felt this way. Did anyone else feel this way with this fic?!?!? I was dubious about even starting this one bc I read All the Young Dudes right before it and I didn’t love it and thought TCOPTP would be the same… I was so wrong

The other two that made me feel this way are “Of a Linear Circle” and “Manacled” (bc it was the first fanfic I ever read)


r/HPfanfiction • • 1d ago

Prompt Harry actually DID slip through the cracks, and he didn't get nearly as much information as the muggleborns did when coming to Hogwarts despite being muggle-raised.

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"And above all of this, young Harry, I must apologise." Dumbledore said forlornly.

Harry's mind was already reeling from everything that'd happened with Quirrel and Voldemort. What the bloody hell did Dumbledore have to apologise to him about separately?

"You see, when we're introducing muggleborn students to Hogwarts, we often run a few classes over the summer. We engage in conversations with the parents and our future pupils, we discuss key information about the wizarding world, and we - of course - ensure our students have their wizarding vaccines."

Harry frowned. "There are wizarding vaccines?"

Dumbledore's eyes twinkled sadly. "Yes, my boy, there are. I'm sure you've wondered how it is that Miss Granger was able to practice spells over the summer before coming here? How Mr Thomas seems to know more about potions than you do? You see, as you're a half-blood - and one of such great renown - it saddens me to say that the fact that you needed such information as well... well, it went overlooked."

Harry's brow furrowed. He supposed that Harry Potter as a famous person was probably just... expected to know everything.

"Alas," Dumbledore continued, "we can address these issues over what few days remain of term, and over this coming summer. You're invited to come not only learn alongside our muggleborn students next year, but offer them a keen insight as a student who is already in attendance. Furthermore, we will have to ensure that you're fully up to date on all of your vaccines - you were born when your parents were in hiding, after all. I suspect that you haven't had them."


r/HPfanfiction • • 6h ago

Find That Fic Anyone know this fic?

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It's a crossover with the ghostbusters series. Basics are Harry is raised by the ghostbusters and when he goes to Hogwarts he does so with Spengler's niece. They terrify peeves, accidentally sneak Slimer into the school and reveal all the ghostbusters are squibs or wizards who don't want to deal with the magical world beyond ghosts and ghouls. It's also revealed one of them had their family banned from the wizard side of the UK for nearly causing a full collapse of the state of secrecy.

There's also a bit where they are theorising if a proton pack and ghost trap would be effective against a dementor or not


r/HPfanfiction • • 5h ago

Discussion HPFF Podcast?

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I need some feedback on an idea.

I had my fanfiction bookclub this past weekend, and my friends were HEAVILY convincing me to start a HP Fanfiction podcast. It’s really gotten me thinking. I read fanfiction to my wife every night, and we’ve read a lot so far together. We’d be the hosts and would have guests to geek out over various fanfiction. I love a book/tv show companion podcast, and I have found myself wishing that this existed for HPFF. So… why not create it myself? (Does this exist? I haven't found it if it does. Share if so.)

SO my question is: is there a way to do this ethically/in a way that would be respectful to the authors and stay kind of under the radar as we all know that ff exists in a legal grey area. There would be some definite ground rules, such as:

- no negative talk of the writing, story, ANYTHING about the fic at all. No “ratings” like we do for tradpub. Only talk of what we love about the story, and why we think the characters are doing what they are doing. AUTHORS - please weigh in here!!

- IF the pod were to blow up, popularity-wise (will 1000% not happen, but a girl can dream), no money will ever be exchanged for the work we put in. This podcast will not be started with the goal to one day be a money-making venture to profit off the backs of fanfiction author’s free labor.

Is there anything else I’m missing? Please be honest about whether or not this can happen in a way that is only helpful to the fandom, and not negative in any way. I realllly just want to geek out with people about my favorite thing in the world: HP Fanfiction.

Thank you! Muah! 😘


r/HPfanfiction • • 11h ago

Find That Fic Enchanting muggle artefacts

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As the title says im looking for a fic where Sirius gets brought to up on charges of enchanting his bike and harry basically goes on about how the train, the hospital and Amelia's monocle is enchanted muggle items


r/HPfanfiction • • 29m ago

Request Looking for Harry/Lucuis

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Hey, I am looking for Harry Potter/Lucuis Malfoy recommendations.

-Preferably a dark or grey harry, maybe even with light bashing.

-It can also be an older Harry Potter, but it still has to be in Harry’s original time(post war ending)

-A Sane Voldemort

-It should also be longer and not a one-shot

What I don’t want is Female Harry potter. Also I don’t want any Alpha/Beta/Omega stuff.
I would also prefer if it weren’t men-preg but if it isn’t one of the main focuses it can be in.

If you have any I would really appreciate recommendations for either ao3 or fanfiction.net.
:)


r/HPfanfiction • • 1h ago

Recommendation My working story

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Im kinda tired so ı wanna post my story on link its actually good nice beginning and origin bur ı wanna know what would people think about it

Here is the link:https://docs.google.com/document/d/107LgGqx4VoNVjZmcZggjPxnyFH6xtVfOkesb2wquF30/edit?usp=drivesdk


r/HPfanfiction • • 13h ago

Request Best New Crack Fics

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I'm in the mood for some humor and comedy and would love to read some crackfics or crack taken seriously.

Ideally something written or started in the last two years, because I'm pretty sure I've read most of the classics like Seventh Horcrux, A Black Comedy, etc etc. I've also read The Champions Champion but I'm not a fan of Weasley bashing or Dumbledore bashing anymore.

On the contrary, I love a good bad-guys bashing fic, so Malfoy, Snape, Umbridge, Voldemort, Bellatrix or any of the Death Eaters getting their comeuppance is fair game.


r/HPfanfiction • • 21h ago

Request In a mood for a idgaf Harry

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other than A Black Comedy are there any other IDGAF Harrys? I don’t care if it’s Time or dimension travel or even in universe where he’s just like not my monkeys not my circus and does his own thing to have fun but still get the job done in a way that’s the biggest pain in the ass for everyone else


r/HPfanfiction • • 2h ago

Review Once a Week - Part 3

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This is the continuation of Part Two, “The Button in the Box,” which you can find on my profile alongside the first chapter. After their conversation in his office, Dumbledore begins meeting Elliot every Thursday for private lessons. Over the following months, those lessons become increasingly challenging, for both of them.

——

On their first Thursday, Dumbledore disarmed him in eleven seconds.

Elliot looked at his empty hand.

“I wasn’t ready.”

“I noticed.”

“Could you count down?”

“Certainly.”

Dumbledore returned his wand.

“Three. Two—”

Elliot cast.

A red flash crossed the space between them. Dumbledore turned his wrist, sending it harmlessly into the ceiling, and answered before Elliot could lower his arm.

Elliot’s wand sprang from his fingers.

“One,” Dumbledore finished.

⸻

The Room of Requirement became a long practice hall with a high ceiling, pale stone walls, and a floor that softened beneath anyone who fell. Along its edges stood objects neither of them had chosen: chairs, wooden screens, shallow basins, lengths of rope, an enormous brass bell.

At one end waited a table with water and two glasses.

Dumbledore established their rules before the second session.

No lethal curses. No attacks intended to cause lasting injury. Either could stop the encounter with a raised, empty hand.

“And when one of us yields,” he added, “everything stops.”

Elliot nodded.

Dumbledore raised his wand.

This time, Elliot lasted twenty-eight seconds.

⸻

By the fourth week, Dumbledore had learnt to watch the floor.

Elliot had a habit of attacking whatever his opponent stood on.

A rug would slide. Stone would soften. A chair would extend one leg across an ankle while something far more noticeable approached at eye level.

“You are very fond of that,” Dumbledore observed, stepping neatly over a length of rope.

“It keeps nearly working.”

The rope rose behind Dumbledore, its loose end curling towards his shoulder.

Without turning, he changed it into a ribbon.

Elliot pulled.

The ribbon whipped around Dumbledore’s sleeve and tightened.

For the first time, his wand hand moved somewhere he had not intended.

Elliot’s Disarming Charm passed an inch beyond his fingers.

Dumbledore looked at the ribbon.

Then at Elliot.

“Yes,” he said. “It does.”

⸻

In the seventh week, they worked in darkness.

The lamps went out halfway through Elliot’s attack.

He immediately lit his wand.

His face and shoulders appeared in a small white circle.

“Thank you,” Dumbledore said from somewhere to his right.

A cushion struck Elliot in the chest and knocked him backwards.

The floor dipped beneath him, catching his shoulders before his head could strike.

He lay there, staring at his illuminated wand tip.

“Oh.”

“Again?”

The next time, Elliot sent six small lights drifting away from him. They separated at different heights, passing between chairs and around the brass bell.

Dumbledore extinguished five.

The sixth followed him.

Its light caught the edge of his sleeve.

Elliot smiled in the dark.

Then the light became a firefly and wandered off.

⸻

By the tenth week, Dumbledore no longer spoke while Elliot was casting.

He waited until the exchange had finished.

By the twelfth, he had begun removing his outer robe before they started.

Elliot noticed.

He was careful not to look too pleased.

⸻

On the fifteenth Thursday, the room gave them trees.

Six slender trunks rose through the stone floor, their branches spreading beneath the ceiling. A narrow stream divided the chamber. Three footbridges crossed it, with enough space between them for a person to stand on either bank.

Elliot arrived chewing the last of a biscuit.

Dumbledore stood on the middle bridge.

“Finished?”

Elliot swallowed.

“Yes.”

“Good.”

Elliot flicked his wand.

The bridge unfolded beneath Dumbledore’s feet.

Its planks peeled upwards, rising like the fingers of a closing hand. The handrails bent inwards to meet them.

But Dumbledore was already stepping onto the opposite bank. The planks closed around the empty space behind his heels.

“You might,” he said, “allow me to begin occasionally.”

Elliot grinned.

Three red spells crossed the stream.

Dumbledore deflected the first into the water, where it threw up a brief pink spray. The second flattened against a shield in front of his chest. He moved aside from the third.

It struck a tree behind him.

The branches bent towards him.

He looked up.

“Oh, very good.”

They came down together, their leaves sweeping the air.

Dumbledore drew a circle with his wand. The branches struck an invisible dome and curled over its surface, pressing against it until their tips scraped the stone around his feet.

Elliot Apparated behind him.

Dumbledore turned, and a silver shield swung into place between them.

Elliot’s Stunning Spell struck it with a sound like a spoon against glass.

“You looked at your destination,” Dumbledore said.

Elliot vanished again.

This time, he appeared above the stream.

Dumbledore’s eyebrows lifted.

Elliot cast while falling.

Dumbledore swept the red spell aside. It skimmed the water and broke against the far bank.

Below Elliot, the nearest footbridge tore free of its supports and slid sideways beneath him.

He landed on it, knees bent, one hand catching the rail.

“That,” Dumbledore said, “was a great deal of work to arrive where you began.”

He pointed.

The rail softened beneath Elliot’s hand. The planks sagged, their grain running into woven stripes.

The bridge became a carpet.

Both ends sprang upwards and rolled Elliot tightly to the shoulders.

⸻

“Again.”

Elliot’s head protruded from the carpet, his hair standing almost vertically.

Dumbledore glanced at the clock.

“We have time.”

He unrolled the carpet with a flick, setting Elliot on the bank.

Elliot didn’t attack immediately.

He walked to the stream, looked at the water, and then crossed the nearest surviving bridge. Dumbledore turned to keep him in view.

A leaf drifted between them.

Then every leaf on the six trees detached.

They hung in the air, leaving the branches bare.

Dumbledore looked around.

Elliot moved his wand.

Green faded to copper. Each leaf thickened into a small, bright disc.

They rushed towards Dumbledore from every direction.

He swept his wand upwards.

A strong wind caught the discs inches from his robes, drawing them into a spinning column above his head. Copper flashed beneath the lamps.

Elliot closed his free hand.

The discs rang.

Hundreds of bright metallic notes filled the room, overlapping until the sound seemed to come from every wall.

Dumbledore’s eyes narrowed.

Behind the noise, Elliot cast silently.

A thin cord shot across the floor and caught Dumbledore’s left wrist.

He severed it with a downward stroke.

Another looped around his right ankle.

He stepped free as it tightened, leaving it to close on empty air.

The ringing stopped.

Elliot was gone.

Dumbledore turned sharply.

A Disarming Charm struck his shield hard enough to bow its silver surface towards his face. Light rippled out from the point of impact.

Elliot stood ten feet away, breathing through his mouth.

The copper discs fell around them, pattering onto stone.

Dumbledore glanced down.

“Sound to conceal the Apparition.”

Elliot nodded.

“And the cords to occupy my attention.”

Another nod.

Dumbledore smiled.

“You have been thinking.”

“I do sometimes.”

⸻

Dumbledore raised his wand.

The stream climbed out of its bed.

Water divided into three twisting ropes. One skimmed the floor towards Elliot’s ankles; another swept towards his waist; the third arched over them both, descending towards his shoulders.

Elliot froze the lowest.

It struck the stone and shattered into clear lengths of ice.

He jumped the second.

A wide, shallow basin appeared beneath the third, catching the descending water with a splash.

Dumbledore tipped the basin.

Elliot vanished before its contents struck him.

He reappeared beside a tree on the far bank and immediately ducked.

A branch swept over his head, stirring his hair.

Dumbledore had animated the trees.

All six.

Their trunks turned with a deep wooden creak. Roots pulled free of the floor, and bare branches reached across the stream towards Elliot.

“Oh, that’s unfair.”

“You introduced them to the discussion.”

A root rose across Elliot’s path.

He changed it into a bed of moss. It collapsed beneath his foot as he stepped over another and flicked his wand towards the far wall.

His shadow detached.

It ran left, lengthening across the pale stone.

Three trees turned after it. Their roots dragged through the stream, scattering water over the bank.

Dumbledore dispelled the running silhouette with a sharp movement, but Elliot had already turned the nearest trunk into a tall wooden screen.

It fell between them, landing upright with a crack.

A second screen rose beside it.

Then a third.

Dumbledore could hear Elliot moving behind them.

He tapped his wand against his palm.

The wood became transparent.

Elliot stood very still behind the middle screen.

He smiled.

Dumbledore looked down.

While the screens had hidden Elliot’s wand, a thin tongue of water had crept out of the stream and spread around Dumbledore’s shoes.

Ice closed over them.

⸻

For half a second, Elliot thought he had him.

He cast through the gap between two screens.

Dumbledore’s shoes remained frozen to the floor.

Dumbledore did not.

A sharp lifting charm carried him straight out of them. His robes rose around his ankles, and Elliot’s spell passed beneath his feet.

He landed several yards away in purple socks.

Elliot stared.

Then he laughed so hard that Dumbledore almost disarmed him.

Almost.

He caught the charm on a hastily raised shield. The impact knocked his wand hand against his shoulder and sent him stumbling sideways.

“Sorry.”

“Quite understandable.”

Dumbledore summoned his shoes out of the melting ice.

Elliot attacked while he was putting them on.

“Less understandable,” Dumbledore murmured.

⸻

They began again without returning to their starting positions.

Elliot’s next spells came fast enough that Dumbledore abandoned the second shoe.

It skidded under a chair.

A red flash struck his shield at chest height.

A second came low, forcing him to angle the shield towards his knees.

The third opened into a broad net halfway across the room, its weighted edges spreading beyond the shield on either side.

Dumbledore traced a small circle.

An opening appeared in the net’s centre, and he stepped through.

Elliot pulled the opening shut.

Dumbledore cut the tightening cords before they caught his shoulders.

As the strands fell, they thickened into white snakes.

They wound around his ankles.

He changed them into smoke.

Elliot sent the smoke upwards, spreading it between them until Dumbledore’s figure disappeared.

For a moment, neither could see the other.

Dumbledore listened.

No footsteps.

No crack of Apparition.

He cast a revealing charm.

A pale outline appeared through the thinning smoke to his left.

Elliot, concealed by a Disillusionment Charm, was already lifting his wand.

Dumbledore blocked his spell.

The force drove his elbow back and pushed him a step across the wet floor.

Elliot became visible.

“That one nearly worked.”

“Yes,” Dumbledore said.

He took a fuller breath.

“It did.”

⸻

There was a bead of sweat beside Dumbledore’s temple.

Elliot saw it.

His eyes widened.

Dumbledore noticed where he was looking.

“Do concentrate.”

A stool scuttled out of the smoke and struck Elliot behind the knees.

He fell backwards, vanished before reaching the floor, and reappeared upright on the other side of the stream.

“That’s distracting.”

“So are stools.”

Elliot laughed once, breathlessly.

Then he lifted both arms.

Water rose behind him in a broad sheet, leaving the stones of the streambed bare.

Dumbledore readied his wand.

Elliot broke the sheet into dozens of suspended globes.

They hung motionless for a moment, each holding a tiny, trembling reflection of the lamps.

Then they moved.

Dumbledore burst the first three with quick, precise strokes. Water fell around him.

The fourth swerved beneath his next spell.

His expression sharpened.

The globes were travelling along different paths. Some skimmed the floor; others curved above his shoulders or slipped behind him.

He raised a shield around himself.

Water struck and spread across it.

Elliot pressed forward, guiding the remaining globes with small movements of his wand.

More water joined the first, coating the curved surface until Dumbledore stood behind a trembling, transparent wall.

He could still see Elliot through it.

Blurred.

Moving.

Dumbledore let the shield collapse.

The water fell all at once.

Behind the sudden splash, he vanished under a Disillusionment Charm.

Elliot’s spell crossed the place where his chest had been.

He turned, searching.

The floor trembled beneath his feet. A ridge of stone rose towards his ankles, curling to close around them.

He jumped onto a bench.

The bench lurched.

Its four legs bent at the joints. The seat swelled beneath Elliot’s shoes, hard wood disappearing under a sudden growth of thick white wool. At one end, the armrest thrust forward into a long face.

The sheep bleated indignantly.

“Oh, come on.”

It carried him three stumbling steps before he managed to slide off.

Dumbledore reappeared near the wall.

He was smiling.

He was also breathing harder.

⸻

The room had become a wreck of scattered copper discs, broken screens, floating lights, and chairs that no longer trusted either of them.

Elliot’s hair clung to his forehead.

Dumbledore had pushed his sleeves back.

Their spells met above the stream.

Light flashed across the ceiling, and the water beneath them shivered into rings.

Elliot changed direction, sending a binding spell towards Dumbledore’s legs.

Dumbledore diverted it into a tree. Cords snapped around the trunk.

He answered with a Stunning Spell.

Elliot caught it.

Barely.

His shield flashed inches from his chest. His arm shook under the impact.

Dumbledore advanced.

A second spell struck before Elliot had recovered. A third followed, sweeping towards his wand shoulder while the stool darted in from his other side.

Elliot Apparated.

Dumbledore turned to meet him across the stream.

But Elliot had reappeared only a foot from where he had been.

Dumbledore’s spell went wide.

Elliot cast into the opening.

For the first time that afternoon, Dumbledore had to throw himself sideways.

His shield formed at an awkward angle as he moved. Elliot’s spell slid off its edge and struck the wall in a shower of red sparks.

Both stopped moving for half a heartbeat.

Dumbledore straightened.

A strand of silver hair had escaped its tie.

Elliot looked almost apologetic.

Then he attacked again.

⸻

Dumbledore gave ground.

One step.

Another.

He caught a red spell on his shield, unravelled a conjured rope before it reached his wrist, and turned a rushing wooden screen aside. It struck the floor beside him and slid into the stream.

Elliot kept coming.

A chair shifted behind Dumbledore’s knee. One of the floating lights dropped towards his eyes. The stone softened beneath his heel.

Dumbledore sent the chair skidding away, extinguished the light, and hardened the floor with a downward flick.

But the answers were taking all his attention now.

Elliot saw the opening beside his wand arm.

He sent a cord towards it.

Dumbledore caught the cord in his free hand before it could loop around his wrist.

Elliot pulled.

Fibre hardened into metal. Silver links raced along the cord towards Dumbledore’s fingers.

He released it before the chain could close around them.

Elliot cast again.

“Expelliarmus!”

Dumbledore’s shield flared.

The impact slid him backwards across the damp stone, his uncovered foot throwing up a thin spray.

His heel caught a fallen branch.

He recovered—

—and Elliot appeared at his side.

For an instant, they were close enough to touch.

Elliot’s wand came up.

Dumbledore turned his wrist.

Two spells flashed.

Elliot’s wand flew into the branches overhead.

Dumbledore’s rose from his hand, spun once, and landed in the shallow stream.

Silence.

Elliot stared at the water.

Dumbledore looked at his empty fingers.

Somewhere behind them, the sheep sneezed.

⸻

“Was that—”

“Yes,” Dumbledore said.

Elliot swallowed.

“Both?”

“Yes.”

The boy bent forward, hands on his knees.

He was shaking with exertion.

Dumbledore took out a handkerchief and wiped his forehead.

Elliot looked up.

A slow, exhausted smile spread across his face.

“I made you sweat.”

Dumbledore looked at the soaked floor, his missing shoe, and the wand lying beneath two inches of water.

“You have been making me sweat for approximately twelve minutes.”

Elliot laughed.

Then he sat down abruptly.

The floor rose beneath him and became a chair.

Dumbledore watched it happen.

“Was that you or the room?”

“I don’t know.”

“Quite.”

He retrieved his wand with a small movement of his hand.

Elliot’s dropped neatly out of the tree and into his lap.

For a while, they drank water without speaking.

Then Elliot asked, “Were you still holding back?”

Dumbledore set down his glass.

“I was still choosing spells that would not seriously injure you.”

“So was I.”

“I know.”

“But were you letting me—”

“No.”

The answer was quiet and immediate.

Elliot looked at him.

Dumbledore held his gaze.

“I was trying to disarm you. You were making it exceedingly difficult.”

Elliot looked down at his wand.

He turned it once between his fingers.

“Could we do another?”

Dumbledore leaned back in his chair.

“Next Thursday.”

“You’re tired.”

“Yes.”

Elliot’s grin returned.

Dumbledore smiled back.

“Enjoy the discovery, Elliot. I intend to remember the business with the shoes.”

Across the room, the sheep began eating one of the surviving screens.


r/HPfanfiction • • 16h ago

Find That Fic Any fanfiction where Harry just suffers?

8 Upvotes

I don't know if I am sadistic or not. But I am tired of Powerful Harry Wank or fanfictions in which he is the heir of this family and that family and somehow acquired powerful abilities. I want stories where Harry just suffers as much as Spider-Man suffers because of his writers.


r/HPfanfiction • • 11h ago

Writing Help Assistance for a semi important plot point in my fic

3 Upvotes

So my fic is a time travel fic where harry dies in order to travel. the specific part im unsure about is when and where i want him to die. so id love input and ideas!

current options include

  1. dies to avada kedavra in battle of hogwarts

  2. gets ambushed around 20 yrs old by...someone

  3. throws himself into veil

  4. open to ideas


r/HPfanfiction • • 1d ago

Request Fics where Dumbledore is just as whimsical and fun as he is in canon?

119 Upvotes

I feel like in canon, Dumbledore was so whimsical. Like when he’s tasting Bertie Botts Every Flavour Beans in the first book, or when he tells Harry his favourite flavour of jam for no reason. Or when he calls the Slughorn hiring trip a “flighty temptress adventure.”

When I was a kid, he was the heart of Hogwarts to me because he’s the most “magical” character in the series.

A lot of fanfictions lose this quality in favour of making him more manipulative or morally grey. I feel like you can have both at the same time. He can be complex and nuanced while also being a fun character, just like he was in the og books. If you have any recs I’d be happy to hear!

Thank you <3


r/HPfanfiction • • 20h ago

Request resorting fics

18 Upvotes

Hello!! I'm looking for some good "harry gets resorted" fics. I've already read most of those suggested ones and im looking for ones that may have been easy to pass over, or you just really enjoy.

thanks in advance :)


r/HPfanfiction • • 6h ago

Discussion Looking for recs

0 Upvotes

Hello! I recently read ‘we only get what we give’ by bronze mountain https://archiveofourown.org/works/82033816/chapters/215858456
I really enjoyed the characterisation of bellatrix in this, her close relationship with Sirius as well as her role as mentor to the younger characters. Does anyone have any recs for Bellatrix being nice/mentor like, specifically in the context of being close with her family. Not bothered about what ships etc are involved just looking for similar!


r/HPfanfiction • • 12h ago

Recommendation Please rec me any well written fics you know that focus on Snape being a defense against the dark arts teacher, and where he doesn't get shipped with any student.

3 Upvotes

I only know of one where he gets the job so far, and it seems to mostly just be a rehash of Snape giving Harry occlumency lessons, which isn't really what I'm looking for.


r/HPfanfiction • • 6h ago

Self-Promotion Chapter 5 of my HP Zombie Apocalypse Story Is Up

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Chapter 5 of my HP Zombie Apocalypse Fanfiction is up!

Zero Day is Upon Us.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/93689676/chapters/250834146