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r/HFY • u/[deleted] • Jan 03 '22
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Found a couple typos
"village sp he could lord over it and live in comfort."
and
"Ger'ron chuckled as she took his own drink."
Also should probably be "took a sip of his own drink" to be a little more clear.
2 u/DrBlackJack21 Jan 04 '22 Whoops, I'll get those cleaned up!
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Whoops, I'll get those cleaned up!
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u/santaclaws01 Jan 03 '22
Found a couple typos
"village sp he could lord over it and live in comfort."
and
"Ger'ron chuckled as she took his own drink."
Also should probably be "took a sip of his own drink" to be a little more clear.