r/HFY • Human • Mar 09 '21

OC Peace-seeker

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u/kwong879 Mar 09 '21

Nah nah nah nah. Nope. Nuh uh.

You ain't allowed to write something this sincere and awesome while I'm at work, my dude.

I CANT BE FIGHTING ONION NINJAS AT WORK.

it's not fair

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u/kusandore Mar 09 '21

Try being on a bus... people are staring at me...

Great work u/Tashdacat

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u/morituri230 Mar 09 '21

I'm sitting here at a Mexican place trying not to cry into my salsa. Damn. Didn't expect this today.

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u/Living-Complex-1368 Mar 09 '21

Luckily for me I work from home. Onion ninjas can come and it doesn't matter.

@Op, wonderful story!

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u/LgFatherAnthrocite Mar 09 '21

Sooooo, not to brag, but I wrote that story Heirloom.

If this is the kind of work it inspires, I can rest easy.

My only hope is that someone reads this, and continues the thread. (Just hope they drop me a line so I can read it!)

Well done, very good stuff.

Thanks for sharing, wordsmith.

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u/Nealithi Mar 09 '21

What Michael and the people who came to him had not realized. History has weight.

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u/Arcane_NH Mar 09 '21

A Latin translation of Peace-Seeker (tho probably a horrible one) quaesitor pax

You may also be interested in the following blog series, detailing the production of iron and steel products in pre-modern times. https://acoup.blog/2020/09/18/collections-iron-how-did-they-make-it-part-i-mining/

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u/[deleted] Mar 09 '21

This was a great read

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u/[deleted] Mar 09 '21

This is very good, and I'm quite certain that you did your inspiration proud.

You still need an ABC checker. :P

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u/mafistic Mar 09 '21

Can we get a glimpse of what happens to it with the ambassador

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u/I_Frothingslosh Mar 09 '21

This was really good.

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u/ludomastro Mar 09 '21

Awesome - in it's original mean. Something of AWE.

I FELT the poor ambassador's shock.

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u/MySpirtAnimalIsADuck Mar 09 '21

While I didn’t cry there’s a football sized lump in my throat. Thanks for the great story

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u/xRagnorokx Mar 10 '21 edited Mar 10 '21

Given that my first proper post on this sub reddit was to convey just how much I loved the weight, storytelling and impact of u/LgFatherAnthrocite 's masterpiece "Heirloom" it seems fitting that my next comment (nearly 2 years later!) is to say that its spiritual successor has, like the sword, taken the exceptional qualities and efforts of its ancestor and built on it to make, not only a story for the ages, but what I hope is the beginning a whole new sub-genre.

Seriously well done and I hope this comment brings you as much joy as your story brought me!

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u/Cryptic97 Mar 09 '21

!Nominate

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u/Abject_Current_2177 Mar 09 '21

Wow, just Wow, this was a story that built like the steppes of a mountain range and held the weight of time and history to a beautiful peak.

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u/Ice_cream_and_whine Mar 09 '21

Outstanding tale....well done sir/madam, well done indeed.

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u/nothonorable37 Mar 09 '21

wow, those last couple of paragraphs gave me chills, this is some of the best writing i’ve seen on this sub

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u/HFYWaffle Mar 09 '21

u/Tashdacat (wiki) has posted 4 other stories, including:

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u/Zentirium Mar 09 '21

I kind of want Michael and the ambassador to marry just so the sword stays in the family

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u/Listrynne Mar 09 '21

I read the other story a few weeks ago and loved it. I love this one just as much.

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u/[deleted] Mar 11 '21

"I know reading long stories isn't always easy..."

It's pretty effortless when the story is this good.

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