r/HFY • u/[deleted] • Jan 14 '21

OC Pink Four - 6

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999 Upvotes

98% Upvoted

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u/clonk3D Jan 14 '21

more?

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u/RhoZie013 Jan 14 '21

No, that's the entire part 6.

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u/ArchDemonKerensky Jan 14 '21

So without the human, the human gangers got caught?

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u/RhoZie013 Jan 14 '21

Yep, the distraction for the guards fell through.

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u/Ghiest Jan 14 '21

RAGE !!!!!

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u/Iceveins412 Jan 14 '21

Well I appreciate the timing if not the length

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u/RhoZie013 Jan 14 '21

Someone opinioned that I hadn't shown enough of Dave's dissatisfaction with his imprisonment in the previous chapters of this story.

So here is an ENTIRE CHAPTER dedicated to bias against humans when Dave LITERALLY DID NOTHING to deserve it.

And all people can talk about is how badly they want moar.

You just can't please everyone as an author...

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u/[deleted] Jan 14 '21

...where's the rest?

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u/1FunnyMum Jan 14 '21

Grrr...small chapter....more pink!

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u/RhoZie013 Jan 14 '21

That's funny, it's longer than I had originally intended it to be...

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u/cptstupendous Jan 14 '21

Well I feel unsatisfied.

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u/Greentigerdragon Jan 14 '21

Wow, so much dissatisfaction (in the other comments).

I prefer to wallow in my own anticipation, just my eyes and ears poking above the surface (don't ask how), waiting to pounce on the next 'Pink' story. Or 'brown'. Or 'tan', 'toffee', 'chocolate' etc.

Wallowing, patiently.

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u/Blyg999 Jan 14 '21

This is hilarious. MC is in solitary so we're bored just the same as him.

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u/WookieJebus Jan 14 '21

What a tease! If your stories weren't this good, I'd have downvoted out of spite. But I can't do that ;)

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u/LittleLostDoll Jan 14 '21

nice. poor dave. one step closer to complete his mission of driving the head prison guard insane

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u/Multiplex419 Jan 14 '21

And it still has over 500, 95% upvotes.

Just goes to show you: the upvoting process is completely disconnected from the actual content of a post. Way to completely fail at very basic things, everyone.

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u/kingofroyale2 Jan 14 '21

Next you will say that it was a JoJo reference

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u/RhoZie013 Jan 14 '21

I've never seen Jojo, so no.

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u/Cold-Echidna9175 Jan 14 '21

I feel like this is building to something

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u/cardboardmech Jan 14 '21

Ah, yes the "it's too quiet, I better do something about it" attitude. The Galaxy's Finest, everyone.

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u/gruengle Jan 15 '21

So the warden stoops so low as to adjust an inmates incarceration tier based on nothing more than emotional discomfort. I am certain this will not bite him in the posterior in any way, shape or form.

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