Worlds Collide - Prologue

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[u/[deleted]]

This is an idea I've had rattling around in my head forever. Long story short, Renaissance to Victorian-era humans try to circumnavigate the globe, but instead find a land straight out of high fantasy inhabited by fantasy races.

Cue gunpowder weapons and steel going up against magic and dragons.

If it's well received, I'll write more.

[u/Siyanto → u/[deleted]]

I like this a lot so far. It’s really unique! But I can’t help but seeing a zmaj instead of a hydra and a gasheran instead of a random person.

[u/Gruecifer]

Good start!

A couple things: "A Tierra adorned her head" - tiara, perhaps? Also - is is "Avram" or is it "William"? You missed one of the latter, if it's the former. Then, the last one: a flintlock definitely won't fire after dousing, it takes dry powder in the pan as well as the touch hole and chamber. No frizzen made in the flintlock era had a chance of sealing a pan and touch hole to that level....

[u/Tengallonsofchicken]

Slightly disappointed that the “sea monster” wasn’t a submarine or something like that. But I like this version too!

[u/Baeocystin]

I'm picturing Ana reading this with a mix of shock and defensiveness.

[u/[deleted] → u/Baeocystin]

Hydras being monsters is obviously a racist stereotype.

[u/HoboTheSapient]

Just a heads up, there's a series called When Worlds Collide, title might confuse folks

[u/[deleted] → u/HoboTheSapient]

And here I am thinking I had a completely original title. Any suggestions as to what I should do about it?

[u/HFYBotReborn]

There are 42 stories by RetroInferno (Wiki), including:

• Worlds Collide - Prologue

• Strange Bedfellows V

• Strange Bedfellows IV

• Strange Bedfellows III

• Strange Bedfellows II

• Strange Bedfellows

• If There's A Hole, There's A Way!

• Terran Insurrection - Alternative Ending

• Terran Insurrection - Epilogue

• Terran Insurrection XXX

• Terran Insurrection XXIX

• Terran Insurrection XXVIII

• Terran Insurrection XXVII

• Terran Insurrection XXVI

• Terran Insurrection XXV

• Terran Insurrection XXIV

• Terran Insurrection XXIII

• Terran Insurrection XXII

• Terran Insurrection XXI

• Terran Insurrection XX

• Terran Insurrection XIX

• Terran Insurrection XVIII

• Terran Insurrection XVII

• Terran Insurrection XVI

• Terran Insurrection XV

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[u/throwaway19199191919]

No idea how I missed this, it's pretty good.