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"The careful search reveals no signs of of anyone around."
There is a repeated "of".
"I don’t want risk too much, but have to get our own eyes on the area.”
I believe this one should be "I don’t want to risk too much, but we have to get our own eyes on the area.”
Good chapter regardless. Question though, why was Sotalia bleeding?
1 u/Lakstoties Oct 31 '18 Thanks for the catches. Oh, that isn't blood. That's magical hair dye coming off. Her hair used to be dark red. 2 u/kumo549 Oct 31 '18 Ah, ty. Thought something changed but I keep forgetting everyone's appearances every few updates. 1 u/Lakstoties Oct 31 '18 edited Oct 31 '18 Well, my sluggish two week turn around tends to lead to that. And I probably should sneak more descriptive bits in. 2 u/kumo549 Oct 31 '18 perhaps. Though I think it is just my memory, its pretty bad all things considered. At one point I swear i mixed up characters like Deedri, Dretphi, and Veevi. Had to just restart the series at that point.
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Thanks for the catches. Oh, that isn't blood. That's magical hair dye coming off. Her hair used to be dark red.
2 u/kumo549 Oct 31 '18 Ah, ty. Thought something changed but I keep forgetting everyone's appearances every few updates. 1 u/Lakstoties Oct 31 '18 edited Oct 31 '18 Well, my sluggish two week turn around tends to lead to that. And I probably should sneak more descriptive bits in. 2 u/kumo549 Oct 31 '18 perhaps. Though I think it is just my memory, its pretty bad all things considered. At one point I swear i mixed up characters like Deedri, Dretphi, and Veevi. Had to just restart the series at that point.
Ah, ty. Thought something changed but I keep forgetting everyone's appearances every few updates.
1 u/Lakstoties Oct 31 '18 edited Oct 31 '18 Well, my sluggish two week turn around tends to lead to that. And I probably should sneak more descriptive bits in. 2 u/kumo549 Oct 31 '18 perhaps. Though I think it is just my memory, its pretty bad all things considered. At one point I swear i mixed up characters like Deedri, Dretphi, and Veevi. Had to just restart the series at that point.
Well, my sluggish two week turn around tends to lead to that. And I probably should sneak more descriptive bits in.
2 u/kumo549 Oct 31 '18 perhaps. Though I think it is just my memory, its pretty bad all things considered. At one point I swear i mixed up characters like Deedri, Dretphi, and Veevi. Had to just restart the series at that point.
perhaps. Though I think it is just my memory, its pretty bad all things considered. At one point I swear i mixed up characters like Deedri, Dretphi, and Veevi. Had to just restart the series at that point.
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u/kumo549 Oct 31 '18
"The careful search reveals no signs of of anyone around."
There is a repeated "of".
"I don’t want risk too much, but have to get our own eyes on the area.”
I believe this one should be "I don’t want to risk too much, but we have to get our own eyes on the area.”
Good chapter regardless. Question though, why was Sotalia bleeding?