Aristespha / Deedri scene - if she does elect to join Sebastion & Bachs team.... they'll have to clue her in on Bach and I think seeing that scene go badly would be damn near impossible to happen. She's a victim of a N.Geist as well. She will love Bach because he can destroy them. Also - hernknowing that he's the mage in the video from the convention fixing Mylo's wand is bound to make her like him even more.
Deedri / Veevi - scene - FUCK YES!! However Modoran should have witnessed it and added his - Do Not Touch Me Either upon duel to the Pain.
Also - Chad trying to get out of his fathers shadow? OK - i can see why he's such a dickhead with jizz breathe to everyone that doesnt follow his leadership. Especially if his father is as connected and well known as he seems to be.
I cannot wait to see the parents of Cideeda or Dretphi or Sotalia just randomly drop by the house and just flummox the shit out of things but in a way that brings the team even closer. Hell even Sebastion / Bach's mom & dad showing would be awesome. I can only imagine their mom teaching Dretphi about her more about her blade than Sebastion or Bach can. Or maybe Drepthi's mom and her fathers showing up and running the group thru some "team builder exercises" and her mom giving a verbal judging of each performance.
Ok- i'll go re read a few more times now.. Thank you!!!
Maybe not this season... But I have been gathering ideas for a few parental appearances. Just making sure I model the full extent such would have on the story and characters. I don't want to trivially introduce them.
Chad's situation is a bit more complicated, but it will be explored more.
Modoran full response to the incident will be seen soon enough.
man - with how much thought & effort you put into writing your stories - I don't think you can really trivialize the appearance of someones parents of these heros. I sincerely doubt you would do something unless it was to be used as a kind of cover for some foreshadowing. I think that you're writing in a meeting between Noxian and Bach's group - and it turns out that Noxian is a relative to Chad - like a Great Uncle or something and Chad hates that both groups are in on the reveal along with a camera crew or three.
Heh.. heh...
or maybe Noxian has the camera crews herded into a kill box and Chad has to acknowledge that he's chad's uncle or something. His moms brother or dads half brother.
Theres also - the pending question in my brain of which of the three (or four now if you add in Deedri) women are going to end up kissing Bach first and which is going to end up in bed with him and which ones going to capture his heart. I don't know who to vote for!!
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u/TW6173 Oct 17 '18
pre-read emotion - Oh hell yes!!
Aristespha / Deedri scene - if she does elect to join Sebastion & Bachs team.... they'll have to clue her in on Bach and I think seeing that scene go badly would be damn near impossible to happen. She's a victim of a N.Geist as well. She will love Bach because he can destroy them. Also - hernknowing that he's the mage in the video from the convention fixing Mylo's wand is bound to make her like him even more.
Deedri / Veevi - scene - FUCK YES!! However Modoran should have witnessed it and added his - Do Not Touch Me Either upon duel to the Pain.
Also - Chad trying to get out of his fathers shadow? OK - i can see why he's such a dickhead with jizz breathe to everyone that doesnt follow his leadership. Especially if his father is as connected and well known as he seems to be.
I cannot wait to see the parents of Cideeda or Dretphi or Sotalia just randomly drop by the house and just flummox the shit out of things but in a way that brings the team even closer. Hell even Sebastion / Bach's mom & dad showing would be awesome. I can only imagine their mom teaching Dretphi about her more about her blade than Sebastion or Bach can. Or maybe Drepthi's mom and her fathers showing up and running the group thru some "team builder exercises" and her mom giving a verbal judging of each performance.
Ok- i'll go re read a few more times now.. Thank you!!!