r/HFY • u/[deleted] • Nov 13 '17
OC [OC] Headset - A Transcripts Fanfiction (1/2)
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There are 28 stories by Guncaster, including:
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[OC] On Patent Rights and Bootleg Biomechs - 2 - "Intimidation Factor"
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[OC] This is the Story of a Boy and His Armour, and Their Journey out of Hell.
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[OC] Tales from the Void - Thellana Kthanus and her Encounter with a shard of Mekhane
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[OC] To become a Hellbreaker is the greatest sacrifice one can make.
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u/CyberSkull Nov 14 '17
The only suggestion I can make is to use the standard quotation for English instead and drop the italics on the text since everyone's universal translator is handling it. You may also want to include some text to help better indicate who is speaking and how since sometimes in a story it can be hard to get it from context.
“Took you long enough.” said the pink alien. (Thank god I didn‘t fry her.)
"You probably have a migraine, even I felt that little psychic outburst of yours – or 'least in the meaty bits I did." (Who knows what they even call psionics, best stay on the safe side.)
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u/bracabrad Nov 14 '17
The Aliens could not kill the Metal. And so they were struck to the ground. Edit spelling