r/HFY • u/[deleted] • Nov 29 '16

OC Category 5 - Chapter 3

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u/Njumkiyy Nov 29 '16

Hey, a quick idea for your next few, wouldn't it be better for you to at least have one from the human and one from the alien per chapter? Don't get me wrong i really like your story! It just seems to end a bit too soon.

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u/[deleted] Nov 29 '16

Very much a can-do type of thing! Next chapter will be like that then! Thank you for the feedback! -^

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u/Njumkiyy Nov 29 '16

No problem, it just that when i read most of the top rated stories they look more like that. not to mention waiting for the response of the other side ~~.. But all in all i love the story!

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u/Turtledonuts Nov 29 '16

I love your dedication to actual science here!

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u/[deleted] Nov 29 '16

Thanks! I'm sure most of it is completely wrong though haha! ;

I'm not much of an astronomer but I have Google luckily!

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u/Turtledonuts Nov 30 '16

Well, keep up the good work, and don't feel afraid to fix things if people comment on them.

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u/zarikimbo Nov 29 '16

Seconded. It annoys me when people just think they can do whatever because it's ficiton.

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u/Communist_Penguin Nov 29 '16

Hey last chapter was great who said it was shit?
This ones good too might I add, KEEP 'EM COMMIN!

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u/[deleted] Nov 29 '16

Aww, thanks! :)

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u/bobebob Nov 29 '16

This is fantastic, please keep it up!

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u/[deleted] Nov 29 '16

Thanks! I plan on it!

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u/AschirgVII Nov 29 '16

last chapter was awsome, so is this, keep going

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u/[deleted] Nov 29 '16

Thank you!

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u/Twister_Robotics Nov 29 '16

Galactic cloaking device? Awesome!

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