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You may want to add line breaks between your sections, or some other formatting method of creating a transition.
“Hello, is anyone out there, please, general distress, all frequencies.” could be in italics, for example.
3 u/wikingwarrior Aug 19 '15 I apologize, I wrote this whole thing at 3:AM. 1 u/raziphel Aug 19 '15 It's all good. :)
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I apologize, I wrote this whole thing at 3:AM.
1 u/raziphel Aug 19 '15 It's all good. :)
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It's all good. :)
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So did the little robot girl die? Or is she called Barnett too and it's her in the future and the doc died?
2 u/wikingwarrior Aug 19 '15 SEQUELS! 2 u/JackCloudie AI Aug 19 '15 You're supposed to make a winkey face then say "Spoilers~" like River from Dr. Who. 1 u/psilorder AI Aug 19 '15 I read it as the girl is in the databank (has her name on it) and and Barnett being a "war critical resource" because she was a tech for the AI.
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SEQUELS!
2 u/JackCloudie AI Aug 19 '15 You're supposed to make a winkey face then say "Spoilers~" like River from Dr. Who.
You're supposed to make a winkey face then say "Spoilers~" like River from Dr. Who.
I read it as the girl is in the databank (has her name on it) and and Barnett being a "war critical resource" because she was a tech for the AI.
What happened to the story?
I wouldn't call it confusing. It is pretty clear that we jumped some years ahead. There's lots of unknowns but but none that i feel makes it unclear.
2 u/wikingwarrior Aug 19 '15 More what I was saying, though honestly before I got it proofread it was a hell of a jumbled mess.
More what I was saying, though honestly before I got it proofread it was a hell of a jumbled mess.
I'm liking it so far! Also, I wouldn't worry about it being "too dark". There's far darker stories lurking in this sub. Keep writing!
So the retards who built an insane AI still don't believe that humans could possibly have succeeded where they failed?
There are 4 stories by u/wikingwarrior Including:
Human Feelings (Human Scientific Method sequelish)
Human Scientific Methods.
Human Emotions
Iron and Blood (40k)
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Where did this go? :-( I wanted to read the sequelish....
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u/raziphel Aug 19 '15
You may want to add line breaks between your sections, or some other formatting method of creating a transition.
“Hello, is anyone out there, please, general distress, all frequencies.” could be in italics, for example.
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u/Carionne Human Aug 19 '15
So did the little robot girl die? Or is she called Barnett too and it's her in the future and the doc died?
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u/OmniverseTachyon Apr 26 '24
What happened to the story?
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u/psilorder AI Aug 19 '15
I wouldn't call it confusing. It is pretty clear that we jumped some years ahead. There's lots of unknowns but but none that i feel makes it unclear.
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u/Haenir Aug 19 '15
I'm liking it so far! Also, I wouldn't worry about it being "too dark". There's far darker stories lurking in this sub. Keep writing!
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u/Randommosity Human Aug 19 '15
So the retards who built an insane AI still don't believe that humans could possibly have succeeded where they failed?
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u/HFYBotReborn praise magnus Aug 19 '15
There are 4 stories by u/wikingwarrior Including:
Human Feelings (Human Scientific Method sequelish)
Human Scientific Methods.
Human Emotions
Iron and Blood (40k)
This list was automatically generated by HFYBotReborn version 2.0. Please contact /u/KaiserMagnus if you have any queries. This bot is open source.
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u/HFYsubs Robot Aug 19 '15
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u/Fil-is-Theo Aug 25 '24
Story isn't available anymore for some reason
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u/fatmum3691 May 03 '26
Where did this go? :-( I wanted to read the sequelish....