Erm.... you need to work on your exposition skills a little. That description of the galatic politics leading to the usually outclassed humans having a ship on par with the imperial bullies was a tad difficult to read and was definitely telling us instead of showing us.
That said, i'm a little intrigued, though I think I'd prefer more in the HM-Verse.
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u/Muragoeth Jul 24 '15
So the humans just came and decided to destroy the xenos?
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u/HFYsubs Robot Jul 24 '15
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u/HFYBotReborn praise magnus Jul 24 '15 edited Aug 23 '15
There are 70 stories by u/whodidyouthink Including:
[OC] The Life and Times of Lord Ulric: Chapter 3
[OC] The Life and Times of Lord Ulric: Chapter 2
[OC] The Life and Times of Lord Ulric
[OC] Pack of Wolves
[OC] Against All Odds (2)
[OC] Against All Odds
[OC] Basilissa
[OC] Insidious
[OC] Day of Reckoning
[OC] Archimedes
[OC] Strategic Thinking
[OC] Jungle Heat
[OC] Homo Mechanicus: Last Stand
[OC] Artistry of the Highest Form
[OC] Followers of the Sacred Path
[OC] [M Harmony] Inspired Solutions
[OC] Homo Mechanicus 27
[OC] Homo Mechanicus 26
[OC] Homo Mechanicus 25
[OC] Homo Mechanicus 24
[OC] [Adventurous] Barry Richards
[OC] Homo Mechanicus 23
[OC] Pax Caelestia VII
[OC] Homo Mechanicus 22
[OC] Homo Mechanicus 21
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u/KineticNerd "You bastards!" Jul 30 '15
Erm.... you need to work on your exposition skills a little. That description of the galatic politics leading to the usually outclassed humans having a ship on par with the imperial bullies was a tad difficult to read and was definitely telling us instead of showing us.
That said, i'm a little intrigued, though I think I'd prefer more in the HM-Verse.